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  • PoIsOnIvY0212

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    Aw! It reads like he's really speaking (if that makes any sense) and is totally understandable! i'd imagine thats how a famous guy feels when he hasnt found 'the one' :') Great job! xoxo
    June 24th, 2012 at 11:07pm
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    That was cute, I liked your writing :) Its funny though, as I was reading the part about Ria it reminded me of what I thought of her ha. I don't hate her, I'm just not fond of her. I liked how you ended it though, I can actually imagine Tom had written that. Great job :)
    February 3rd, 2012 at 08:56pm
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