I'm Not Insane - Comments

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This is one of the best bandfics I've ever read. Honestly. It's just a great story period. You developed the story really well and engaging way especially hard to do with flashbacks and in all dialogue. I guess my one critique would be that occasionally the narrator's speech seems a little contrived. Like 'They arrived quickly and took me away.' it's a fine sentence just seems a little contrived for the normal flow of conversation.

Wow....okay not what i was expecting. This is great and so left of centre and i mean that in the best way possible. I have never read anything that even comes to being similar its also really detailed and placed in a great setting so great job :)

Wow....okay not what i was expecting. This is great and so left of centre and i mean that in the best way possible. I have never read anything that even comes to being similar so great job :)

Just wow. This is a very unique story. I love how she started out all harmless and shifted to bat crazy. I think this was an amazing story very well written. Great job cannot wait to read more of your stories. :)

D: It grabbed my attention the second it mentioned cutting and her obsessions. I really like the way you took the time to detail their emotions and you could clearly hear their feelings throughout the dialogue. You took the seriousness level of the story up higher with every paragraph o: I can’t wait for the next chapter to see how this works out.

Too fucking amazing for words even AMAZING isnt even and amazing enough word for this. You could feel what the character was feeling and just ugh it got to me I loved it (:

Okay so I have two things to say.
I like the narrative way you tell the story. It reminds me of this movie called Let Me In. But Anywhoodles I like the way it seems legit, but she slowly gets madder and madder and her control slips. I think this would be an awesome short film :P
Secondly, I don't know if you planned this, but it seemed to me like she never really loved Val, her obsession just shifted. That was the only part that was a little miffy to me.

O.O Mind fuck. Like whoa. I'll get back to you when I regain the ability to think >.<

Holy crap that was intense. I truly have nothing more coming out of my mind aside from intense. You are such an amazing author. Able to convey human emotion in everything you write so well. I could visualize it. I could hear her telling the story, her frustration growing. I could hear her scream at the end in my mind. All I can say is brava.