I Wish I Could Be The One. - Comments

  • Jesse711

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    Please don't make me wait another day for the next chapter !!
    August 7th, 2012 at 12:21am
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    Love tht fight it was fucking awesome and badass, Tyler and his goons got their asses beat, Jenny and her slutty robots got their asses beat and on top of tht Britain was this scary intimidating person tht made Thler look like he was about to pee his pants like seriously I think Tyler and his idiotic group won't be messing with Britain, her sister and her friends ever again after tht scary and threatening threat, Zacky is such a great guy him and Britain should totally date and I'm tryin to recall if they r or not...I laughed when Zacky pretended to be Berkely on the phone when Britain's mom was on the phone, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    August 5th, 2012 at 05:08pm
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    I love it! Violence! Tyler got his ass handed to him! I'd love to see more of that intimidating, scary Britain too! I love how Zacky was acting like Berkley and how he's all like "you shouldn't lie to your mother like that..." it's funny and they're totally cute together! But yeah violence! :D Everyone got some action!
    August 5th, 2012 at 10:44am
  • Jesse711

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    Ahhhh I LOVED this chapter !!!!!
    August 5th, 2012 at 09:04am
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    I can't wait for Zacky to beat the shit out of Tyler!!!! I wish I could see it! I love a good fight!!
    August 3rd, 2012 at 06:43am
  • MoMo_92

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    Love it, can't wait for this fight between Zacky and Tyler with a lil help from Matt sooo it's goin to be good, I just love Zacky in this chapter he was so cute when he realized tht his ice cream dropped on the ground lol anyhoo can't wait can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    July 31st, 2012 at 12:54pm
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    Yay moooore !!!
    July 31st, 2012 at 02:54am
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    she seems to not notice all the cute names he's calling her i hope they just get together soon!!
    July 1st, 2012 at 04:15am
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    Tyler ur goin to get ur ass beat by the guys so bad tht u wish u didn't spike Brit's drink what the hell is wrong with u like seriously ur fucked up in the head but not as fucked up as Jenny u knew tht ur boyfriend cheated on u with Kassidy and u didn't do anything u r stupid I would have cussed the both of them out and broke up with Tyler, now I'm still gettin suspicious about Kassidy being nice I mean what's her game plan but honestly I think she is being nice becuz she wanted to changed but I'm giving her the benefit of the doubt until she does something fucked up....Zacky is such a sweetheart for takin care of Brit and honestly he shouldn't blame himself they wanted to stay and have fun so u let them they didnt kno tht Tyler was goin to be an asshole and spike Brit's drink sooo don't blame urself....hopefully Brit feels better cant wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    June 30th, 2012 at 08:41pm
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    Poor Brit! :( I can't wait til Monday comes because Zacky is going to kick Tyler's ass!!! I'm surprised that Britain wanted to go to the party, it's not something I would have expected coming from her. I'm kind of glad that Zacky didn't leave Kassidey there alone, he at least cares about her a little bit even if it's just because she's Britain's sister. I like how sweet he is with Britain, taking care of her and all right now with her being sick.
    June 30th, 2012 at 08:28pm
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    Kassidy is kinda suspicious I think she is being nice to Brit is becuz she doesn't want Brit to tell Brian about her infidelity with Tyler sooo thts my theroy and I'm sticking to it, Zacky and Brit look so adorable sleepin on the couch together, Jimmy is a nut tippin the Zacky off the couch silly stallion duck lol but Brit being a drinker very badass can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    June 29th, 2012 at 01:52am
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    Yay! More updates!! :D I'm very pleased to hear that! I love how Jimmy just flips Zacky off the couch like it's nothing. Kassidey being nice is a bit suspicious. Not many people I know know that German phrase, I liked seeing it in here. But I still find it funny that Berkley chases Zacky when he sees him.
    June 29th, 2012 at 01:28am
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    I love this update, Brit did a little transformation I see, I'm glad tht Brit and Zacky got to talk and Brit apologizing so everything is all good now as long as Kassidy stops being a bitch and get over the fact tht no one likes u and the reason they r tolerate u is becuz u r datin Brian but other than tht u r just scum underneath their shoes so yea...can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    June 28th, 2012 at 06:19am
  • Jimmy.Sullivan

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    So, can I kill Kassidey? I mean, she really pisses me off!
    June 28th, 2012 at 05:36am
  • Jesse711

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    I LOOOOVE your story please update soon!!!!!
    June 28th, 2012 at 04:46am
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    Of course I'm going to stick around! It's amazing! And about Avenged Sevenfold!
    I love how Britain and Zacky made up and everything is good between them again. I love how Jimmy gives Zacky thumbs up when he leaves and everything. And how Britain is willing to eat lollies after 4 for Zacky and watch movies and all, that's awesome.
    June 28th, 2012 at 01:45am
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    I didn't think that was shit... I loved it.
    June 27th, 2012 at 09:13pm
  • MoMo_92

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    I don't kno y Kassidy is upset for Zacky was telling the truth and she needed to hear it becuz she was thinking she was the shit when she really smells like bullshit so thank u Zacky....I hope Brit talks to Zacky and tells him tht she forgives him and tht she does believe him, Kassidy if I was u I would be more nicer to ur sister before a little secret of urs so happens to slip out of Zacky's or ur sister's mouth and u don't want tht to happen so get ur attitude and ur shit together, tell Tyler to leave Zacky and ur sister alone becuz if Zacky was ur friend like u said thn u should stick up for him and tell Tyler to leave him and Brit alone becuz if u don't I'm sure karma will be waiting for ur hoe ass around the corner, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    June 26th, 2012 at 09:44am
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    Yay! Update!! :D The chapter wasn't shit, it was short but it wasn't shit. I love it! I really love how the story is going.
    June 26th, 2012 at 08:53am
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    I love this. And I miss this! Please update soon.
    June 26th, 2012 at 02:11am