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  • FluffeeWrites

    FluffeeWrites (400)

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    Thank you! :) and oops my bad. :$ I'm sorry.
    February 26th, 2012 at 06:29pm
  • Lady.V.

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    That was without doubt a good read but it would be better if you used paragraphs. :0 You also had some grammar mistakes but nothing too serious. :] Good luck with the contest and whatever happens don't stop writing. XD
    February 25th, 2012 at 03:08pm
  • fantasyangel

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    I think its really good. I like how you took a different way of explianing then most people would. It would be awesome if you wrote more to this story. I'd like to see what would happen next if you did. :)
    February 25th, 2012 at 04:10am