Hmm this just seems like a plain old high school. I'm not liking this, it's too weird lol, the school I mean not the story. Anyways, another great chapter.
I KNEW IT! I KNEW IT WAS MATT!!!! But I didn't know the other guys would be there too. I would be hella scared if they were all staring at me like that. Haha, poor Brian but that's what he gets for throwing away her clothes. OH HELL NO!! TAKING MY LAPTOP, that wont fly with me. I'm already not liking this school, way too many rules lol. Great chapter!
So, we meet Brian. This should be interesting. The school doesn't seem so intimidating right now but I have a feeling she's underestimating this place. I really like Priscilla, she makes me laugh. Oooo who was that who spoke from behind her. I want to say Matt but I could be wrong or maybe it's another student idk I'm going to find out. *rushes to go find out*
Anyways, now onto chapter 4. Aww the goodbyes made me sad. I would hate to have to leave my friends and go to some foreign place on my own. I'm sure she can handle it though, well except the sexiness of the Avenged boys because that will be hard to handle. REALLY DUDE?! REALLY?! YOU DIDN'T GET YOUR DAUGHTER ANY COFFEE, SHAME ON YOU MAN, SHAME ON YOU!!! HAHA. Now I'm really trying to be funny haha but really if he didn't buy me no coffee I would have told him off, well I don't like coffee anyways but at least something, sheesh. Anyways, great chapter. Typical overprotective parents, smh lol. I can't wait to see what happens when she gets there.
YES! BEAT THAT BITCHES ASS!!! THAT'S WHAT SHE GETS FOR TALKING SHIT!!! Loved this chapter! She's going out with a bang, I love it! Just ahhh girl!!!! Great chapter and great story, I will have to check out more of your stuff
Oooooo Priscilla is in trouble! lol. Uh oh, it looks like she's going to be sent to A.S. High, this can't be good haha. She doesn't seem too intent on going haha and what will her friends think? Great chapter! Off to read more
So, this is another story that peaked my interest. Just reading the small description on your story page, my interest was peaked so I clicked it. I read the summary and decided that I just had to read this. I want to know if Avenged will be able to put her in line or not. Very good first chapter! Priscilla is a badass, I love it! I would be so bored too if I had to listen to that boring shit but I probably wouldn't have been able to up and leave like that no matter how much I would have wanted too. She's obviously hanging out with a bad crowd but I like them anyways haha. I'm going to read a little more, I don't know if I'll read all of it, well at least not right now because I have other people to get to but we'll see. If this story pulls me in like I think it will, I might end up reading it all. Great story love!
So i came across this story because of your blog post and instantly got suckered in. I'm on chapter 6 and i;m loving it. I've got it bookmarked and i've sub'd and rec'd too. Gotta jet in 5 but i will most def continue reading when i get home.... You're writing style is engaging and i love the witty humor dropped in here and there.
Great chapter :) I love the fact that you're on a roll. I get so excited when I recieve an email saying that this story is updated. It makes my day, to be honest! :D
I think this is the first time EVER Mibba has decided to give me an A7X story in CS. It was about fucking time.
I've only read the two first chapters so far, so I guess I can't say too much just yet, but I'm probably going to read on a bit, see how I like how it continues and then comment again!
First of all, I think you should go over this and put in a few more paragraphs, just to make it easier to read. Sometimes it's difficult to follow where the sentence continues because of how little space there is. But that's no big deal.
So far, I'm liking this story. What I really like is that it's only two chapters in, and you can tell so much about Priscilla's character. It helps the story start off because it kind of cuts right to the chase and lets you know what you're dealing with. And frankly, I'm enjoying reading about her. I love rebellious characters, who tend to act out and have their strong groups of friends. I haven't often come across a story with the main female chracter having such an attitude and I love it.
Perhaps it would have be nice to know a bit more about the stuff Priscilla had bene up to previously, to give more detail as to why her parents decided for such strong action against her - but maybe that's still to come. Either way I'm exciting to see how this will go. And seeing how much she doesn't like the idea, I'm curious about how her parents will manage this - and hwo her friends take it.