I've Got A Thing For You - Comments

  • derelict-heart

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    @ Cali's Mommy
    Thank you so much, your comments are seriously amazing :)
    October 28th, 2013 at 07:50pm
  • Cali's Mommy

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    Awesome story.....can't wait to read the sequel! I loved the light heartedness (is that a word??) of this. I laughed at how mean she was and some of the things they did. But love wins out in the end!! I guess I will just go backwards through your library until I read ALL of your stories. I still can't believe that I haven't already read more of your stories, but now that I have read some, I will get through them all eventually! :) And I agree with bxgurl95.....more people need to know about you!
    October 26th, 2013 at 12:02am
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    @ bxgurl95
    Thank you so much, you're the best :)
    May 20th, 2013 at 11:37pm
  • bxgurl95

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    It's not even about nick it's really jus that this story was so beautifully written and I fell in love with it almost instantly. More people need to know about you
    May 19th, 2013 at 09:06pm
  • kartal1984

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    such a lovely story!!! :)
    April 1st, 2013 at 09:42pm
  • Mxprincess241

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    So I loved this. There's not enough Matty stories on here :)
    May 19th, 2012 at 05:28pm
  • samlo

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    Another freaking story of yours that I abosulte fell in love with as soon as I read the first chapter and couldn't get enough of. I'm looking forward to the sequel. I already read the first chapter & I love it. :D

    If you don't win that contest, I have lost faith in all hummanity. There are only a handful of people that I've come across on this site, that have the technique & talent that you do when it comes to your writting creativity. Don't ever stop! I'm always loking forward to the next time I'm able to read an update from you. :]
    March 31st, 2012 at 06:14am
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    At first, when I got the e-mail about it being updated, I was a little upset because then it would be over. But then I saw there's a sequel! Anywho, fantastic finish. I loved it. And I'm toootally going to read 'Ours' when I get home from work. :)
    March 30th, 2012 at 10:14pm
  • cognitive-dissonance

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    <3
    March 30th, 2012 at 08:59pm
  • weasleychick09

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    Honestly I was expecting this story to have way more comments. Apparently not enough people appreciate Nisky but you know what they are missing out.

    There is so much I could say about this story that would probably go on for pages and I am pretty sure that wouldn't be the most exciting thing to read. But I guess I will try to keep this simple for both of our sakes.

    I love the characters! In the beginning Matt didn't act like this good old small town boy he kind of had this sarcastic side that was definitely hilarious and unexpected, but then at points he would be such a sweetheart and gentleman that I couldn't help but swoon.

    Then Rory all her little quirks or "things" just made her more realistic and easier for me as a reader to relate to because I am sure we all wonder and worry how we come off to people. Even though Rory gives off this self confident persona she definitely has vulnerabilities.

    They are just so real it makes the story that much better. It does help to that the story concept and writing is amazing. After reading this I don't know if I will look at any other story on here the same.

    Okay I am starting to ramble so I am going to stop while I am ahead. Can't wait for the next chapter of Ours and Over You!

    Amanda

    P.S. Good luck with the contest!
    March 30th, 2012 at 05:44pm
  • nessajc

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    The text message to her dad. Oh lawd. I just love this story. I'm jumping up and down for them.

    Ugh I wish more people wrote about Matty. The man is adorable.

    I can't wait to here more about this two for that contest entry.

    :)

    I love these two. I love Terry in all his Terryness. I want to go to Minnesota now. Her dad is pretty awesome.
    March 30th, 2012 at 10:31am
  • Big.City.Dreams

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    Oh thank God! I'm so glad that they ended up together. They are just perfect for one another. I'm looking forward to reading the sequel. :)
    March 30th, 2012 at 10:20am
  • Vivian.

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    I have so many feelings rushing through me right now, so I'm going to try my best to put them all down here. First of all, I want to tell you that this story is beyond wonderful. It is perfect, and beautiful, and I just want to love it and you forever and ever. I wasn't kidding when I said Matt and Rory are my favorite couple. Throughout this entire story you got to see inside these two entirely different people who came together, well, more like clashed together at first lol, and ended up finding themselves through each other. They say opposites attract, and that is certainly the case with them. But when those opposites come together they form a perfect balance and I am so, so, happy Rory was finally able to realize that and fly her ass to Duluth to tell Matt she loved him. Which she wouldn't have been able to do without the help of her lovely father. My god the line "You go after your Minnesota." killed me. But in the most amazing way :') Okay, I'm going to end my ramblings now, but I really just want to make sure you know how much I have truly enjoyed this story and I can't wait to continue reading Matt and Rory's journey in "Ours" :)
    March 30th, 2012 at 10:14am
  • Big.City.Dreams

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    Well shit. You've got me crying. This is honestly one of the best written stories that I have read. When you described their summer, it was beautiful. I want that. I want to live what your characters have this summer. The way you described her when she was looking in the mirror too. The words that you choose, they are always perfect.

    I'm hoping with all my might that they end up together somehow. If not now, somewhere down the road. I like them together. Too much, probably. I'll be honest, in the first chapter I didn't really see them being some great couple. They were just so different. But as the chapters went on, they just sort of melded together. People search forever for love like that. Where the person who is their lover is also their best friend, their other half! And that is exactly what Rory and Matt are - two halves of a whole. So that being said, I want - no, I need - them to be together in the end.

    I can't wait to see where you take the characters and their lives in this last chapter. Whether that be separate or together, or both. This last chapter is either going to kill me or make me giddy like a school girl with her first crush. There is no in between. You've done such a great job with this. It's beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing. :)
    March 29th, 2012 at 10:33am
  • Electra Heart

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    One- I love Lana del Rey!
    Two- I really wanted Rory to stay! I mean I totally read Ours :p but this is still SO frustrating because now I NEED to know how they got from here to there! Need to know!
    March 29th, 2012 at 06:41am
  • Vivian.

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    Senses. Comes to her senses -_- I'm in a bad place right now. Don't judge me monkey.
    March 29th, 2012 at 06:08am
  • Vivian.

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    WHY DO YOU HAVE TO DO THIS TO ME? I mean, I knew this was coming eventually. Summer has to end, and so does their time together, but they could have made it work! Matt loves her for fuck's sake! But knowing Rory I know she's absolutely terrified of what's happening between her and Matt. I hope she comes to her chances and decides to take a chance on him :) One more chapter weeee!
    March 29th, 2012 at 06:05am
  • Cupcake1

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    Can't wait for more!
    March 29th, 2012 at 05:37am
  • Penguins11

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    OH MY GOD!! I think I just fell in love with Matt Niskanen thanks to your story :) Can't wait for more!!
    March 21st, 2012 at 11:36pm
  • cognitive-dissonance

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    Last two chapters were amazing! I love the humor (as always) and it was great to read that Rory was warming up to Nisky, then things really heated up! So this story makes me really want to hop on the next flight to Minnesota and just spend tons of time photographing the area. I mean, I've seen pictures online, but your descriptions were amazing! I was able to picture everything vividly in my mind :) Oh, and one more thing: is it weird that as I read this chapter I felt that "After The Last Midtown Show" was a perfect fit? Like seriously, I was singing the song in my head as I was reading! But I will get back to your comment as I watch the Pens and cry over their perfection :) Commenting on a story is easy to do on my phone, but anything longer than that is time-consuming and frustrating!
    March 17th, 2012 at 04:35pm