Going Insane - Comments

whoooaaa bugga-boo that gif is hurting me!
whooo I switched to default and now I shall begin my reading and commentation :P
okay so first off, that last bit, deep man.
Very powerful.
I think you did a very good job of showing both sides of a bad situation
And how sometimes, you gotta see things from the other side of the looking glass.
I’d definitely like to see this as a story.
The only real critique I have is that I really have no idea who these people are,
What type of music they make, etc.
Maybe elaborate a bit more?

Since the story had no comments, as I red it, and now mine added, why else were you puting it up for the swap?
English is not my primrary language, and is hard with spelling, not sure if you noticed? Yet, I try my best.
In the story, this did work, since it's long enough to scrol, whcih, sadly, doesn't work on the summary, which's where you get, before actually reading.
If the image doesn't matter, I'm pondering what it adds? what is the purpose? A regular still would have given me more.
Oh, so this is the entire story. not sure if it's pro ot come to mention. some like to know, others are bothered by knowing.
I like to add as much into my comment to you, as I hope to get back from the next comment.
Just like I enjoy connecting with a few people, you never know, when you meet your next friend?
Oh, and sorry about any confusion.

Wow, on a second note, I hope it's not the hysterical image in the layout, that prevented people from commenting here.
You really need your comments as much as the next Author/Wrighter.

Wow, on a second note, I hope it's not the hysterical image in the layout, that prevented people from commenting here.
You really need your comments as much as the next Author/Wrighter.

(Comment Swap) First, the moving image is seriously getting in the way. there is no reason for a still to move like this.
(Chapter 1) "the glass from my hand", is "the glass in my hand"?
Seems to depict why so many mucicians die young?
and why so many groups can't hold together?
I feel sorry for the poor guys, with such a pest on the tour.
The bassist does have a point, the guy really is lucky he's still on the tour.
Besides, it's from the bottle, the feed of deamons came?
aside from the pase of the tour, and the stage?
I hope the comming chapters are more interesting, htough the story is easy to follow. Furthermore, I can't complain about the vocabulary, I guess it comes with the shjow. maybe i should have complained more, had it been too clean, clinical?