Marching On - Comments

I really think that Lavin is jumping the gun here yet she's moping around like the victim... yes her father is sick but he's still there and he's still king, why is she breaking up with Harry about the future that might not even be an issue? I just don't understand her thinking. Harry has every right to be upset and even mad especially after what she did to his girlfriend before they got back together. I can't wait to see what's going to happen. PMS

I'm loving all of the updates in the past few days! I absolutely love where this story is going and I can't wait to see want is next for Lavin and Harry!

You can really see how Lavina has matured throughout the story,especially how she handles the whole affair with Harry, from her previous behaviour (fleeing out of the room like a teenage girl) to calmly explaining to Harry the issue.

I do not know Prince Harry but I felt you portrayed him very well in your story, I loved that little paragraph in the chapter where his 'heart swelled and broke at the same time.' - it's what you call an oxymoron am I right?
You can really picture your characters as real people, not just ambigous figures in society, where we are left to speculate ( in fact I wished there WAS a real life Lavinia for Harry)
- I was actually mistakenly describing this as a film to a friend of mine because I could picture so vividly the characters and settings of your story that I completely forgot it was a story!

The climax of the chapter for me would have to be the kiss, ( I can actually imagine the whole scene.... With the sunlight gently seeping into the room creating silhouettes... Then Lavinia jumping into Harry's arms and them kissing with the whole 'kissing silhouette with the sun as a background' image before the exchange of a few last words before Lavinia leaves for good.

Leaving me on a cliff.. Not fair.. ): But it was a good chapter full of lots of sadness and knee-weakening love. So great work, doll!!

this is beautifully written

This is so sad. I hope something gets worked out!

What a beautifully sad chapter, very well written- it leaves me uncertain about their future (unlike quite a few novels I have read where the conclusion is very obvious and cliche....) I can just imagine them, curled on her couch, in the candlelight...... It seem so bitter sweet and......

It was even more endearing and tear jerking when Lavin noted that she hadn't seen him that like that since he told her about his mother's death.....Little snippets like that make it more realistic for me, and make me wipe away tears furiously so my roomate doesn't think I am bipolar or something....

Another one of the tear jerkers was the mention of Lavin's mansion, how Harry asked when they were married if he could visit..... I could really feel how devasted and emotionally torn Lavin AND Harry were in this chapter.......

It is so wonderful to know that they still love each other, despite their relationship ending I can sleep in peace knowing that they ended that relationship on good terms.....

Such a lovely sad chapter

Here in Australia it's already the weekend! Time Zone Difference!!!!! It's horrible! It's daylight savings tomorrow (Sunday) and school resumes on Monday!

So sad. ): Gosh, I'm rooting so hard for Lavin and Harry! I just want this to be a pretty fairy tale, but how interesting would that be, right?

Anyways, you're style of writing is magnificent. I can follow what's happened easily and have no problem understaning WHY it's happening, which is something a lot of authors on here neglect. <3

This chapter was beautiful - I was just about in tears. I can't comprehend how harsh it would be to have to try and choose between your family and your love. You did a beautiful job of bringing their emotions to the table, and I loved how Harry was the one to break down, the kind of reversal of the stereotypical roles of the man comforting the woman. I thought it was really fitting, and I cannot wait to see what happens!

Nice to see Lucy and Temperance again! And Ben! Loved the little remark about Pippa from Ben........ He's such a funny lad... Lavin should definitley sign up for the polo match- can see some people getting their butts whooped by her!

It must be an excruciating position for Lavin to be in ,with her reputation with the Danish people, her family, and her crown at stake-
I can feel how Lavin is finally realising that she needs to break it off with Harry, that their is no *real* alternative (Alexander the Great :D ), I guess she knows despite her feelings for that certain red head that she must be loyal to Denmark.

Somthing I thought I might bring to attention- I am a bit surprised of the lack of tabloids coming to the realisation of Harry and Lavin not being able to marry and be together... (probably because of Kate and Will's *little* wedding ) and I am wondering how long before the public catch on?

Oh , just a random thought- have you ever solved a Rubix Cube?

Hope your well!

Hello, I'm a long time reader, first time commenter on your story.
And I just . . . AHHH!
I really, really, really want Lavin to end up with Harry!
I want them to have beautiful children, be forever in love and to have him support her in her capacity as Queen. And the fact that that may not happen because of her father’s illness is heartbreaking! Especially since Harry already said that they’re gonna be next to marry :(
Oh I do hope that you’ll make that happen in the end, but for now, I’ll keep tissues at the ready for when she breaks the news to Harry!

Poor Lavin. ): I just want her to be able to be with Harry and get married and be happy. *sigh* But great update! Can't wait for the next one!!

I reaaaaaally like this story. Honestly never know what's going to happen. Can't wait for the next update :)))

:D WOOT! UPDATE! *fistpump

I swooned with happiness as I read the chapter-
Harry and Lavin seem so sweet! I have mixed feelings about Lavin abdicating though......despite my feelings for the duo...
I can just imagine them as little children, you know with pretend fake marriages and that sweet innocent feeling. I really got the connection and the strain of Lavin's feelings in here.
This is an excellent story, quite original with the whole 'royalty' thing (most have Harry paired off with an American commoner) and I can't help but appreciate England and Denmark more......
Thank you and keep up the good work!
Any updates soon?

She needs to tell Harry!
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So good. I hate it when they fight. Great update.

Absolutely love the last chapter! So good!

I absolutely loved it. And how I had to take 2 minutes to remember who caroline is made me realiz how long Iv been reading this story haha.

Gah! Relationship fights suck balls!
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This chapter was so cute. Loved it.