Homophobe - Comments

yayyy, thanks for the shout out :D i really like mason so far, and i'm so stoked to find out what happens next. update soonnn! (:

O.O
It's about to go down.
-subscribes-

You. Are. A. Fantastic. Writer. Such great insight and depth to a single character while giving us a perfectly clear view of the other. I love the plot, I love the characters, I love everything!!

I am loving this, it's really interesting!
I can't wait to see where you take this.
Update?

Layla seems like that type of annoying bitch that is awesome at the same time xDDD
Chase seems like he's hiding his inner feelings by makin fun of homos
I really like this story
update soon please
cause I am too falling in love with this :DDDD

this is really well written, and your characters are great! i love itttt! can't wait for your next update :)

Oh I love this :D I'm always looking for good gay fiction and it's usually the same old same old you know? A bunch of emo kids lusting for each other in a totally unrealistic way, and there's usually some scrawny girly kid. But your characters are amazing, they are realistic, because yeah...you have those flamboyant gay guys but most of them are just every day joes haha. And your characters act like guys (Which they are) and it's great.
I don't understand how Ash can have a crush on his homophobic best friend, or rather I didn't understand until you explained how long they'd been friends and then I was like....aaawwwwwwww D: poor Ash. I feel so bad for him, cause it seems like he doesn't want to like him BUT HE DOES. Damn. Life's hard. Anyways, I liked the part where you went in on there background and how Ash started, like, noticing things about him...especially when he talked about girls haha. I was just like, ooh you poor whipped sap haha.
Anyways, now that I've left you an obnoxiously long comment I'm gonna go stalk your other stories (just kidding, but I will read them) and so...bye.
.Peace.

Wow, I love the layout, I love the first chapter, I love it xDDD
Update soon?