Dreaming of Reality - Comments

I'm here as the new judge for the Fairy Tale Contest!

I enjoyed the way you opened this story up with the fact that her parents passed away in a car accident and the fact that her babysitter was watching a Disney movie. You also had her move in with her mother's sister, who I'm only assuming is evil because of the connection to Cinderella. I do wish I could've read more of this to see the outcome of everything!

I'm having mixed thoughts about this story. You're writing is simple, no mistakes, nothing special, really. Which isn't a bad thing. The only thing that's making me sort of frustrated is that comment swap gave me your story when it was still in its infancy; this prologue is so tiny and it doesn't really even give me anything to comment on. However, I think the little girl at the top of the writing is friggin' adorable. Anyway, I think that the concept of it is actually quite interesting and eye-catching. I'll make sure to come back once the story progresses; when I can give you a legit comment. Update soon!