A League of Villains - Comments

Your story has an interesting idea, and I was really excited to see all these characters come together, but it is really difficult to follow what I did skim through...which was ch 12 because it had a funny title and no warning about torture. Also swearing makes stories boring.

Comment swap.

So, I'm personally not into this. No offense to you at all, just not my thing.

That being said, I only read the first chapter. It seems like this is more for you anyways. I think this story is on crack in itself, but you should contiue with it. Just my opinion.

As for the storyh itself, the layout is readable and there didn't seem to be many mistakes in the first chapter.