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Found this story yesterday and literally could not stop reading it. Amazing writing...had me go through an emotional roller coaster and I loved every minute of it. Now on to read the sequel...

Found this, read it, and now hate life. This story was perfect. I don't care that it "can't be perfect," no, it is. I'm literally in love with it. You are a very gifted writer and delivered an amazing story, so thank you.

Just found this story yesterday and read it all at once. Amazing story and great writing! I really loved it! Off to read the sequel!!!

Fantastic story, made me cry a like there is no tomorrow at times and broke my heart and made me laugh at the same time... Fantastic writing style, I have just subscribed to the sequel and I'm excited to read that
:-) keep up the good work!!!

Hey there. Just wanted to say that this whole story was truly amazing and I really really liked it! I hope someday I'll be buying your books from the store because seriously I hope you become an writer. Great work!

This was amazing. Absolutely amazing. Greatest thing I have ever read in my whole life.

I just re-read this all over again in one shot...it still gives me warm and fuzzies! One of my favorites on Mibba.

Found this story 3 days ago & just finished it. Absolutely loved it! Can't wait to read the sequel; which I'm gonna go start doing right now. lol =)

Wow, I haven't read much fanfiction since my mild obsession with The Suite Life of Zack and Cody in the seventh grade years ago but this has me hooked. So good. I found a recommendation to it eons down the Gabriel Landeskog Tag on Tumblr :S Trying not to read the comments because I am only on chapter 11 but ahhhh seriously in love with the way you have the charcters. Be a writer. Seriously.

ah this was such an incredible story!!!! I am SO sad that it's over but I cannot wait for the Ryan/Lily story!!!!!! You are a fantastic writer! I know I've said that before but I just can't seem to say it enough!! keep up the great work :)))

I was putting off reading this chapter because I knew it'd be the last... But there's going to be a sequel!? Yes! :)

Ahhh they're so adorable, this is the most perfect ending.... well actually no ending would be the perfect ending ;) But I'll wait patiently for the sequel! Your writing is wonderful, I thoroughly enjoyed this :)

This story was absolutely amazing! I'm really glad all the characters are headed in the same direction. I can't wait to see what the sequel holds. And I'm hoping it's more Lily and Ryan. Separately or together they are both such intriguing characters! I literally can't wait!

The final chapter was perfect. I'm glad you wrote a more light hearted & happy chapter than the last. I truly enjoyed this story & I hope you are able to start the sequel soon. Good luck with your finals!

OMG I loved it!!! I can't wait for the sequel. This story has been absolutely amazing

Frig, Gabe is quite honestly the most perfect person in the world. Like his reaction to her in this chapter proves it. Like omg... And I kinda expected what Serena was gonna say... But not the suicidal thoughts :S and at first i was freaking out thinking that she actually gave away the necklace from gabe...

I love this story so so so so much! Thank you for updating such a long chapter! I really hate to read about Serena going through all of this, but I am happy that she is opening up to Gabe and not being so stubborn!! thanks again!

That was such an incredible chapter!!! I LOVE your writing and it seemed so real! You have such an incredible gift and I am so glad I am able to witness it! I cannot wait for the last chapter! It's so bittersweet :( I want to read it right away but at the same time I don't want the story to end :(( good luck on your tests though!!

Wow. That last chapter was just...amazing. Good luck with finals...looking forward to the last chapter, even if I'm a bit sad that it's just about over