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  • flyersfanatic10

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    Found this story yesterday and literally could not stop reading it. Amazing writing...had me go through an emotional roller coaster and I loved every minute of it. Now on to read the sequel...
    July 5th, 2014 at 02:17am
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    Found this, read it, and now hate life. This story was perfect. I don't care that it "can't be perfect," no, it is. I'm literally in love with it. You are a very gifted writer and delivered an amazing story, so thank you.
    June 22nd, 2014 at 04:44am
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    Just found this story yesterday and read it all at once. Amazing story and great writing! I really loved it! Off to read the sequel!!!
    June 20th, 2013 at 02:35pm
  • kartal1984

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    Fantastic story, made me cry a like there is no tomorrow at times and broke my heart and made me laugh at the same time... Fantastic writing style, I have just subscribed to the sequel and I'm excited to read that
    :-) keep up the good work!!!
    April 4th, 2013 at 02:37am
  • chickenfried101

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    Hey there. Just wanted to say that this whole story was truly amazing and I really really liked it! I hope someday I'll be buying your books from the store because seriously I hope you become an writer. Great work! Smile
    November 23rd, 2012 at 06:34am
  • maplel34fs

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    This was amazing. Absolutely amazing. Greatest thing I have ever read in my whole life.
    October 30th, 2012 at 11:46pm
  • Dallas.

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    I just re-read this all over again in one shot...it still gives me warm and fuzzies! One of my favorites on Mibba.
    September 7th, 2012 at 05:07am
  • Dee Flyrs Grl

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    Found this story 3 days ago & just finished it. Absolutely loved it! Can't wait to read the sequel; which I'm gonna go start doing right now. lol =)
    June 12th, 2012 at 03:08am
  • chilipepper246

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    Wow, I haven't read much fanfiction since my mild obsession with The Suite Life of Zack and Cody in the seventh grade years ago but this has me hooked. So good. I found a recommendation to it eons down the Gabriel Landeskog Tag on Tumblr :S Trying not to read the comments because I am only on chapter 11 but ahhhh seriously in love with the way you have the charcters. Be a writer. Seriously.
    June 1st, 2012 at 11:42pm
  • shitnuggets

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    ah this was such an incredible story!!!! I am SO sad that it's over but I cannot wait for the Ryan/Lily story!!!!!! You are a fantastic writer! I know I've said that before but I just can't seem to say it enough!! keep up the great work :)))
    May 5th, 2012 at 08:34am
  • jenwash

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    I was putting off reading this chapter because I knew it'd be the last... But there's going to be a sequel!? Yes! :)
    May 5th, 2012 at 07:01am
  • tayls52

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    Ahhh they're so adorable, this is the most perfect ending.... well actually no ending would be the perfect ending ;) But I'll wait patiently for the sequel! Your writing is wonderful, I thoroughly enjoyed this :)
    May 2nd, 2012 at 03:12am
  • Big.City.Dreams

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    This story was absolutely amazing! I'm really glad all the characters are headed in the same direction. I can't wait to see what the sequel holds. And I'm hoping it's more Lily and Ryan. Separately or together they are both such intriguing characters! I literally can't wait!
    May 2nd, 2012 at 02:17am
  • Emiliana

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    The final chapter was perfect. I'm glad you wrote a more light hearted & happy chapter than the last. I truly enjoyed this story & I hope you are able to start the sequel soon. Good luck with your finals!
    May 1st, 2012 at 08:31am
  • BeautyAndBalor

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    OMG I loved it!!! I can't wait for the sequel. This story has been absolutely amazing
    May 1st, 2012 at 05:24am
  • tayls52

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    Frig, Gabe is quite honestly the most perfect person in the world. Like his reaction to her in this chapter proves it. Like omg... And I kinda expected what Serena was gonna say... But not the suicidal thoughts :S and at first i was freaking out thinking that she actually gave away the necklace from gabe...
    April 27th, 2012 at 05:34am
  • sportsfanatic19

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    I love this story so so so so much! Thank you for updating such a long chapter! I really hate to read about Serena going through all of this, but I am happy that she is opening up to Gabe and not being so stubborn!! thanks again!
    April 26th, 2012 at 10:46pm
  • shitnuggets

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    That was such an incredible chapter!!! I LOVE your writing and it seemed so real! You have such an incredible gift and I am so glad I am able to witness it! I cannot wait for the last chapter! It's so bittersweet :( I want to read it right away but at the same time I don't want the story to end :(( good luck on your tests though!!
    April 26th, 2012 at 07:06pm
  • Dallas.

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    Wow. That last chapter was just...amazing. Good luck with finals...looking forward to the last chapter, even if I'm a bit sad that it's just about over
    April 26th, 2012 at 01:49pm