Gosh, talk about getting someone hot and bothered! I love the detail in this that I almost felt like a fly on the wall watching it all! Clearly written, which I can't thank you enough for because It Is one thing I can't stand is when someone doesn't structure it correctly! Anyway rant over and back to the story- Loved the ending by the way, and I think it was a good way to end it! Good luck, results should be announced once I hear back from everyone!
Fucking hell. You never disappoint with smut. That's for damn sure. I loved the entire thing. From the stripper act to the rough sex to the sudden proposal and then to her saying she didn't need a ring. Absolutely perfect. I loved it so much! :D Awesome job!