Holy shit... I totallly love this. Well, I admire the characters you've created, Dana, Archie, Landon and her children (& children's children). I love this family blood-line thing and I know you've put so much effort into writing this story and creating the characters. But must I note that the prank Landon and Dana did on the girls were freaking hilarious? It's a good idea to put into Dana's memoir :D The setting is amazing. I love how it shifts around at different time stages and it didn't confuse me at all. I knew exactly what was happening and when they fitted in the story timeline.. I haven't read a story where I felt like this. But it makes me sad that it ended the way it did.
I also love how you didn't explain some things, leaving the readers to interpret themselves. Like if Landon ever tried to pursue her, or if he ever loved her back. Then why Dana would marry Archie when she loves another man. I love the little blank spaces you left because it makes the story realistic-- as a person is thinking back on their life, there's ought to be spaces and little spots that they miss playing back at.
The setting is amazing. I love how it shifts around at different time stages and it didn't confuse me at all. I knew exactly what was happening and when they fitted in the story timeline.. I haven't read a story where I felt like this. But it makes me sad that it ended the way it did.
I also love how you didn't explain some things, leaving the readers to interpret themselves. Like if Landon ever tried to pursue her, or if he ever loved her back. Then why Dana would marry Archie when she loves another man. I love the little blank spaces you left because it makes the story realistic-- as a person is thinking back on their life, there's ought to be spaces and little spots that they miss playing back at.
Wonderful story :)