All Hope Is Gone - Comments

Here from comment swapping:

Finally a story I can actually write a decent comment for aha. I'm sick of being given silly boy band fanfictions. Anyway, layout is quite simple and I think would benefit from a more suiting layout. I think you should put your summary up before your disclaimer. Your writing style isn't bad at all, however some paragraphs are really long. I don't know whether that's accident or not? But good job, I really like your descriptions of your characters.

It's really cool how you're writing fan fiction for this show, there's some great ideas including! I think you mixed dialog and other paragraphs really well, and your title it really captivating, too. :-)

Whoops, sorry, just realized I posted this twice!

It's really cool how you're writing fan fiction for this show, there's some great ideas including! I think you mixed dialog and other paragraphs really well, and your title it really captivating, too. :-)

Hi all, Miss May here from my new account jut to let you know that I am moving All Hope Is Gone over and will be continuing it! So come by and check it out, should be all up with corrections and a new chapter in a few days xox

Okay, so I love the show, never really thought about getting into the fanfiction. This is awesome though! Your descriptions are amazing, and I really liked how into the story I was. I love when I get taken away and I feel like I'm right there in the action, and you totally do that. Some people find it super hard to get that descriptive and not have tons of dialog but this is just perfect! You're very talented and I hope you keep writing!

I am not one for anything related to The Walking Dead, but I stumbled upon this and decided to give it a read. The way you describe everything- the characters, the background, the whole aspect of the zombie apocalypse in your words is just beautiful. Your chapters are a great length and the pace is perfect.
You've definitely drawn me in, and you've got a great future with this fan-fiction. I can't wait to read more when you update in the future! :)

Oh my gosh I can not wait until you update

I'm not at all familiar with the character of The Walking Dead, but I do like the nifty and clever titles for each chapter.

I'm not sure if you meant to put that into a separate paragraph but perhaps space it out some?

A thin silver chain ending in a locket dangled from her wrist as her dirt and blood stained legs shook, even with that gun in her hand she knew it wouldn't be enough to save her. With few bullets left, she may as well put one to good use and blow her own brains out. It would save her the pain and agony of being torn to pieces by these things and the horror of becoming back as one, just like...shaking her head Anastasia pushed fresh thoughts from her mind and sucked in a deep breath of staling air while she forced her legs to stop shaking and to stay perfectly still inside the small metal cabinet she had barred herself into.

She squeezed her hazel eyes shut and blew a section of long dark brown hair from her face and mouthed hushes to herself.

I enjoyed this chapter as a whole, but it makes it hard to read when there's no space between the paragraph. Your descriptions were beautiful, but since I've never seen The Walking Dead, I can't say whether or not the characters of the show were in character.

Good job and good luck. :)

I've only read the first chapter but it's really good so far. I've never watched the show and probably never will (not my kind of show), and though I'm not familiar with the characters, it seems like you've done a really good job of displaying each of them. I like how you show what each of their thoughts are, opposed to the story being from only one person's point of view. The only major criticisms I have are that there were a couple of spelling and grammatical errors. But these were hardly noticeable, so I commend you on that. Good job and good luck with the rest of this story and all of your other stories! :)

I have never in my life watched The Walking Dead, but this story might have convinced me. Let me just say I love it. You capture the whole survival, running from zombies thing perfectly. I really can't wait unitl you update again. I'm subscribing and recommending this!!! Anyway, I only saw a few spelling mistakes which isn't anything big. Also, your layout is gruesomly cool :)
Update soon!!

First I got to say, your layout is very chilling which is very nice for your story.

Now with your story,
This was very creepy in a good way, I'm not a huge fan of Walking Dead because I can't get the channel; but this story makes me want to get some of the dvds so I can watch it. This is a very well written story, and very enjoyable to read; I love how you not once made the story drag. For a fan-fiction this seems almost original thanks to the characters, which I totally love in fan-fics. Plus I haven't found any grammar or spelling mistakes.

Keep up the good work.

Thank you comment swap and your visit to my story (: your story was incredibly greeeeaaaaaatttt!!I know that "nobody's perfect" but your story actually flawless,keep it up!(:

First off, I'm not a fan of the walking dead, but after getting this in the comment swap, I may have to start watching.
You're an amazingly talented writer, and I love how much description you're able I put in without making the story drag. And i feel like you did a great job of creating your original characters.
Keep it up :) x

Comment Swapper, I really enjoyed this story. The descriptions and characters are great and really enjoyable. The layout fits the story and it's almost like you there and the writing style is nice and enjoyable to read. Keep on writing this story.

I loved it!! It was really well written!! I can't wait to read more!!

Comment Swap~
I have never watched Walking Dead but after reading this I want to. c:
I love your writing style. I like the characters, all of them~ The original & Walking Dead ones- though since I've never watched Walking Dead I can't really say who's who.(x
The layouts good for the story, cause zombies~
& I like the way you gave Daryl an accent that matched his character. Anastasia also seems pretty badass.
Keep on writing ! c:

Luckily I've watched the first season of the Walking Dead so I know what fandom it's from. Although it's had for me to watch it because of the suspense XD

From what I've read you have a really good story. You stay true to the character's while adding your own. I will say however, that your chapters are a little long. It would be easier to shorten them a little. Not a lot, just a little. I have no complaints other than that. It's a really good story, good luck with it. And good luck with your future stories as well.

Because I'm here from comment swap I can't say I know anything about this whole series because I've never gotten the time to sit down and watch it, though from what I have seen via clips and what not it does look like a really good show.
Because I haven't watched it I know next to nothing about who the characters are so I'm doing my best with following on.

You've done a really good job with the spelling and punctuation, I couldn't really find a single error though I am a quick reader. Just in case I suggest maybe doing a read through before you publish it in case of any errors you hadn't seen beforehand.
Overall you've got a really good story here and you should keep writing because you're really talented.

Hey, I'm here from comment swap. Other than half-watching a couple of Walking Dead episodes with my boyfriend, so I can't say I know much about the canon, but zombies are always cool, so I'll just try reading this like original fiction.

A little bit more of setting detail would be nice. I know she's in a cabinet, but what kind of building are they in? Are there actually a bunch of zombies surrounding her, since she seems concerned about being heard by them and then quite suddenly not when the others show up?

But other than that, the story is really good. I'd love to know what she's hiding and how everything is going to turn out. Hope you continue on with this.

omg I love this! Especially this last chapter where Anastasia pounded Merle's face, he so deserved it.