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Author [No! Jimmy Protested]
Cat Lady - Comments
Great Britain (UK)
This is such a sweet little drabble! I've never seen anything quite like it so I'm so, so glad that I stumbled upon it.
What I like most about this is how it sounds like it's been taken from a full conversation or a longer story. It works on its own, but if you wanted to, you could expand this with no trouble.
I also really like the lack of description. When you read it there's so much dialogue but it works and normally short pieces with more dialogue than description are out of balance.
The only thing I'm not keen on is the smiley face as the chapter title. I think it just takes away from the drabble and makes it seem a bit cheesy.
February 23rd, 2012 at 05:50pm
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