Part of Your Heart - Comments

So I just read both chapters and I think the beginning is really strong and the plot is a good one. You should definitely continue this!

Alright just finished chapter two. It was really great! Gaje is so cute! You actually made me say aww and smile. I felt reall bad when the girls mentioned father and how Gaje has no idea about his father. I also feel bad for Roison because it isn't going to be easy for her to tell her son that his father is dead and he will probably be really sad. Aww it was nice for Arin to come over and try to cheer her up. He is a total sweetheart and I hope that he can help her in some way. I really like this story and I hope that Roison will be able to move on. Anyways great story and I can't wait to see what happens next. *subscribed*

Well I just read the first chapter and I have to say it was amazing. I was so sad through the whole thing because of Jimmy's death. He was a really great man and we all miss him even today. I feel very bad for Roison and the baby and hopefully she will feel better soon. Arin was very nice to Roison. I would hate to feel how Roison feels right now. I really like this a lot.

I really hate being the first to comment on something, but I like the concept you have going on here. :) I hope you plan to keep going with it because it's nice.