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  • Jaquie!

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    I'm not sure who this band is either, but regret it because this Josh is fricken smokin' hot.And with that accent? To diiiie for!

    I wonder what her problems are that are forcing her out of her home country, but I guess that will be explained later.
    June 21st, 2012 at 06:41pm
  • PsychVampGrimm

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    Finally cought up and i didnt expect all of the things she did in her past. Just saying i have no idea who this band is but i love this story anyway :)
    June 21st, 2012 at 05:39am
  • DancesWithSugarCubes

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    Wow! I've never ever heard of You Me at Six before. I had to do a little research before I started to even know what I was reading about x) I got here by comment swap, if you could tell, haha. Your writing flows smoothly and overall I think that if I were into this band (or had heard of them before) I would have really enjoyed reading your story. Please don't take it as though your writing is bad, though!
    June 20th, 2012 at 05:45pm
  • PsychVampGrimm

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    i havent finished reading all the chapters but i am really liking it and Nina is so mysterious and i want to know more about her. i like the way this story is going and i will for sure be reading more :)
    June 19th, 2012 at 11:11pm
  • gipsy danger.

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    Comment swap brought me here and I have to say I am so glad that it did. I have only read a few chapters but I am already hooked. I like your style and the idea of your story. The dialogue is great, a bit of comedy and serious at the same time. Each chapter has me wanting to read more and I can't wait to see what happens. I will definitely continue to read! :)
    June 19th, 2012 at 10:31pm
  • daenerys targaryen

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    Hey I know I already commented but comment swap brought me back here again so I read a couple more chapters so give you some more feedback. One thing that bugs me in stories is using links where they just aren't needed. Sometimes it's even more effective to describe an outfit so readers aren't sidetracked. But other than that, you know I love your style and I hope you keep up the amazing work. :)
    June 19th, 2012 at 06:20am
  • pillowsnfeathers17

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    Hi there :) I read the first couple chapters of your story, and I like your style of writing. It feels really easygoing, which makes it easy to read. Sometimes that's hard to pull off, so good job :) There are a few run-on sentences that make it a little hard to read sometimes, though, but it's a nice story for the most part. Good job!
    June 18th, 2012 at 08:22pm
  • witch.

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    I'm dying because comment swap took me to a You Me at Six story and I'm so happy I might fall out of my chair and throw my computer across the room. I've read a few chapters so far and I can't even tell you how great this is.
    June 18th, 2012 at 07:32pm
  • maddisonFTW

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    I was brought here via comment swap and may I begin saying I was thrilled to find it as a you me at six fanfic! I absoulutly adore You Me At Six! This is an amazing story and I have only read a few chapters but I am already pulled in. It has perfect detail and you have the boys down to a T. I will be sure to subscribe and I would be thrilled to read on!
    June 18th, 2012 at 05:26pm
  • Baroque Faeries;

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    This story is really, really sweet. The dialogue is perfect, the actions and descriptions are so very, very real. Not to mention I absolutely love your banner, and a sexy British accent ;-) But then again who doesn't? Lol Can't wait for the next update, this is a truly unique story, and the only thing I can say is what I like to say to every story I comment on. Make sure to avoid cliques, and have fun! :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
    June 18th, 2012 at 03:00pm
  • alyv08

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    I've just recently started listening and getting into You Me At Six and fan fiction related to them. This one, in particular, is very unique in reference to your writing style. I found myself going from just reading a few chapters to the entire thing at this point. It's really good and I can't wait to read more :)
    June 18th, 2012 at 12:33am
  • minidiva12

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    More more more more!!!!!! Mr. Green
    June 18th, 2012 at 12:29am
  • Nowhere Kids Voice

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    So at first I only meant to read the first couple of chapters but then I found my self needing to read more. This is a great story, with amazing detail. The layout is also nice and doesn't distract or take away from the story. Honestly I can't wait until you update next :D
    June 17th, 2012 at 09:33pm
  • Ben Jolliffe

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    I really like this story :) definitely not what I was expecting from this chapter cause it was so much better than what I thought :)
    June 17th, 2012 at 09:32am
  • Dead Puppeteer

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    This story is a little different for me. I'm not a fan of Josh Franceschi in the least, but thought I'd give it a try. I've only read two chapters, but those two are really wonderful. You have a unique writing style that is all your own and I applaud you for that.

    Your story starts off a little weird, but as I continued to read, it got better.

    I'm not a fan of soft colors for layouts, but you seem to make this one work pretty well.

    All in all, this is a pretty fine story.
    June 17th, 2012 at 04:12am
  • lorenmoore

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    Intense!! Love this story!!
    June 17th, 2012 at 03:03am
  • saveredheads

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    That was not at all what I was expecting... excellent update :)
    June 17th, 2012 at 02:57am
  • AH-Pika-Chews-Youh!

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    Soooooo not what I expected, but I liked it... When's your next update going to be?
    June 17th, 2012 at 02:36am
  • EzioAuditore

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    Okay, Okay, I have to start with saying that I came here through Comment Swap but I really love this story. I'm a little busy tonight so I only got to chapter 7, but I'm gonna continue reading. I'll probably leave another comment then so you'll see. This story is really great. I like the idea of putting them together in a project to write a song, that's a nice way to get the relationship between them going. Being only on the 7th chapter, I already support Nina and Josh...they seem to have some kind of chemistry. :3 See..your writing made me feel chemistry.. :P <3 Great work.
    June 15th, 2012 at 10:27pm
  • ptvjaime

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    Gotta love Comment Swap, huh? It's brought me to such lovely little stories, and this is definitely one of them. First of all, I love the soft colors of the layout in contrast with the title pic and the title itself. I love contrast, though, so what can be expected? And I also love Josh, so that definitely attracted me to the story. As well as the fact you've got grammar and spelling almost down pat except for a few errors. Ending on the kiss was good, and I can't wait to see what she's been hiding. Luckily, it's in the next chapter. ;)
    June 14th, 2012 at 08:06pm