May, Princess of all Vampires - Comments

This is great. :)

I'm caught up, but I regret to inform you that there are a lot of errors in chapters 15-17. The story is great otherwise, though. Anyways, thanks for updating.

Quite a few errors in Chs. 12 and 13 so please be sure to revise them. Otherwise, those chapters were good.

Some of the errors are now fix.

Thank you I will be updating Chapter 12. But however I'm sorry for the grammatical errors in both chapters. The fight between May and Xavier okay. When they clashed against each other...May was holding her dead friend in her arms after taking his powers. The near end of the story takes the readers back to what happen between the fight of May and Xavier.

:( Unfortunately there were quite a few grammatical errors in both Chs 10 and 11, but I enjoyed the story all the same. I didn't fully understand the fight between May and her friend, but I sort of got it. Anyways, thanks for updating. Please update again soon.

Thank you. I need some one to subscribe as well. And I just post it on there not so long ago.

Just re-edit for corrections like grammar. Otherwise, the chapter is good. Please update soon!

Just re-edit for corrections like grammar. Otherwise, the chapter is good. Please update soon!

Love the updates. Please update again soon! ^_^

Okay. I promise to do much better next time.

I don't in any way, shape, or form mean to sound like an English teacher or if I'm bashing your story, but
Actually, there are a lot of grammatical errors such as sentence fragments, incorrect tense usage of words and other errors, but overall, it's a good story. If I did decide to inbox you a corrected form of the chapters you have written so far, it would probably be around the end of the week in which you'd receive it. Anywho, please update soon. I'm subscribing to this story, btw.