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  • nearly witches.

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    I'm a Maine fan, but I don't really know any of the band members, so I'm excited to read this!

    I really was quite gutted for Carson when John proposed to her friend. I was so sad when she showed for the wedding and had to go through the initial stages, but I had a proper you go girl! moment when she stood up and said all of that to John. I was honestly heartbroken when I realised that the two of them weren't going to get together after the wedding. It would have been a cliché ending though, and I love how you've avoided that by having her transfer to a different area. It's such a sad moment, but you've executed it so well. Lovely description, too! You add in loads of little details that make this all really lovely to read through and your sentences flow together so naturally.

    I'll be announcing the winners later on, so good luck! Cute
    August 3rd, 2013 at 09:50pm
  • QueenOfaScene

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    Thanks for making me cry Jenna!!!
    But then I got a tissue and dried my tears because I realized there was a sequel! Fuck yes<3
    March 27th, 2012 at 07:40am
  • The Color Abi

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    Amazing ending.
    Made me sad.
    March 26th, 2012 at 01:48pm
  • The Color Abi

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    They should have gotten together at that wedding.
    They really should have.
    March 19th, 2012 at 08:32am
  • The Color Abi

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    I'm so glad that she's told him how she feels, finally!
    March 12th, 2012 at 02:01am
  • heroine .

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    This is really good, I love it so far, please continue !!! Subscribed !
    March 5th, 2012 at 02:14am
  • The Color Abi

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    Brilliant update.

    I just want her to stop him before he makes a huge mistake that he'll regret forever.
    March 5th, 2012 at 01:55am
  • The Color Abi

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    I'm not a huge fan of The Maine, well, actually, I've never listened to them.
    I love stories about them though.

    This opening this is brilliant, really.
    I love how head over heals in love she is with him and yet, he decides to marry her best friend.
    That's just a kick in the teeth.
    February 27th, 2012 at 02:16am