I think it crazy how much I can relate to this story just from reading the prologue. There are some huge contrasts, but these are things that I have experienced, that I have watched others experience, and so on. I think you definitely captured a struggle that a lot of teens go through in the midst of their lives. To do so is complicated and sometimes so bias. But I think so far you have done a beautiful job. I also wasn't expecting Danielle's boyfriend to be abusive. I think taking the story of Danielle's perfect life into such a dramatic turn is brilliant. Danielle was this vibrant flower, perfect everything until an almost fatal mistake. I am very curious to know where this story goes. You are extremely talented and I hope to read more from you xx thank goodness for comment swap picking your story out for me to read xx
October 10th, 2014 at 10:10pm