April 4th, 2012 at 03:07pm
Wow, I must say this is a one of a kind piece I have just read. The summary was very intriguing and I was hooked instantly. The beginning paragraph would have been slow if not for all the detail you put in. It was beautiful at first.
Like a normal day at the beach, but when the ' The clean air was replaced by the ominous stench of death and decaying meat.' I was instantly reading as fast as I could to figure out what was going to occur. I read this at school after emailing it to myself, you commented on my journal, you were actually the last person to request me this story of yours, and I clicked it maybe because I was curious due to the title, but thankfully I did, this is the best I've read in a while. Well done, I am totally subscribing. You have gotten yourself a fan.
Everything from the slight details, to the smells and appearance of the sky was amazing. This story looks amazing with the plot. The characters seem to hold that opposites attract feature, which always comes in handy when comic relief is needed.
The banner and layout just sets the mood for the story. Just everything is amazing!!
I'm subscribing. :)