May I just say. That I really do love this story. I can't to begin to read the sequel ;)
October 1st, 2013 at 03:36am
She Will Be Loved - Comments
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I am officially done reading this story and the story is amazing. I totally didn't see that ending, but I loved it. Some things I absolutely adore are Quinn and Jacob's text messages. They made me laugh several times. Really love this story and I can't wait to read the sequel. July 11th, 2013 at 03:52am
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I found this story through a recommendation in the magazine and I'm so glad your story was recommended. It's amazing. I'm slowly reading through it and even though I'm only on chapter 4, I already like it so much and I can't wait to finish this comment and get back to reading it.
I noticed this though (It's at the bottom of chapter 4): "Alright, I'll try." Quinn laugehd.
Other than that, I love this story and Quinn's outfits are super cute! July 10th, 2013 at 08:44pm -
I feel like you just shoved me into the pacific without a life jacket. It was so sudden and unexpected. I've had fun reading though, and I'll read the sequel tomorrow!June 16th, 2013 at 03:58am
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I have to say that I do feel like this is a little far fetched. Considering all of their abilities, I don't think she would have been able to hide her relationship with Jacob from Edward or Alice. I feel like they would have seen and heard everything already. Forks is a small town, so I don't feel like any of them would be that oblivious. She would also disappear from Alice's vision when she traveled to La Push, so that would probably cause them to worry as well- just like they did with Bella. So I think that deserves some mentioning.
The timing is all wrong, so I'm super confused by everything. The wedding is right in the middle of the school year, and for some reason the Cullens aren't even in school. Weren't they seniors, graduated, and then got married? So it was like in the summer or something? I dunno I could be completely wrong. I haven't read the books in ages. Haha.
Your writing is awesome! You're very descriptive. You really know how to set the scene around her, and bring all of the emotions through. I think, despite my confusion, this was a really good story. I can't wait to read the other two you sent me, now.June 15th, 2013 at 05:41pm -
I'm so sad to see this story end, it's been so amazing, anyways, update soon I guess :)June 15th, 2013 at 01:19pm
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THREE CHAPTERS?????June 14th, 2013 at 01:15am
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I have so many thoughts running through my head bc she still doesn't know that Jake's a big giant puppy and what about Edward k seriously I'm kinda expecting a massive showdown but then there is so many possibilities its scary. Update soon!June 13th, 2013 at 02:55pm
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Oh she gonna shit when she finds out he's a wolf!June 8th, 2013 at 02:01pm
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Oh wow, that was very sudden, but it was cool in Jacob's pov. Yay! It got reviewed!! Update soon!June 8th, 2013 at 11:22am
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I freaking love this story. It's so cute!! And it makes me grin like a idiot, hopeless romantic that I am. Your writing skills are amazing. Keep it up!! :)June 6th, 2013 at 08:08am
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This is so cute and I can't wait to read more! Update soon!June 5th, 2013 at 03:52am
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Loving this story :)June 4th, 2013 at 10:44pm
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So loving this story:)May 26th, 2013 at 10:14pm
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Totally enjoying the updates and can't wait for the next one...May 24th, 2013 at 06:36pm
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Such a good story! Keep it up!May 23rd, 2013 at 09:43pm
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I wonder what's going to happen next!!
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You're starting to update this again!
I loved them! Please hurry with the next chapters! :DMay 21st, 2013 at 09:53am -
Please update soon!May 21st, 2013 at 09:38am
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Love this story!!! sooo soo happy to see you working on it again!!! yay!!!May 19th, 2013 at 10:55pm
