Everything Changes - Comments

tbh, I've never read a Zacky Vengence fic before.

But I really enjoy you're characters and how they interact with each other and I've only read a handful of chapters, but I'll definitely be going back to read the prequel so I can better understand the sequel. can't wait to see where this is going to go!!

Oh, oh goodness!
This story has taken such a turn and I love where it is going from the very first story to this one.
Your way of writing is marvelous, being able to write like this is always something I wish I had gotten good at, but I always got confused on the whole ordeal.
Can't wait for what is going to happen next!

Oh, oh goodness!
This story has taken such a turn and I love where it is going from the very first story to this one.
Your way of writing is marvelous, being able to write like this is always something I wish I had gotten good at, but I always got confused on the whole ordeal.
Can't wait for what is going to happen next!

I'm trying out comment swap and I must say I am glad this story was chosen for me to read, even though it was a bit confusing, as I haven't the first story. But for starters, I absolutely love the friendship between Savannah and Zoey, it's almost exactly like the friendship I have with one of my friends! And although I only read the first chapter, I feel as if there's a bit too much dialogue and not enough detail, but they could have changed further into the story. You obviously put a lot of work into this story and that is amazing, keep it up!

I'm trying out comment swap and I must say I am glad this story was chosen for me to read, even though it was a bit confusing, as I haven't the first story. But for starters, I absolutely love the friendship between Savannah and Zoey, it's almost exactly like the friendship I have with one of my friends! And although I only read the first chapter, I feel as if there's a bit too much dialogue and not enough detail, but they could have changed further into the story. You obviously put a lot of work into this story and that is amazing, keep it up!

I adore this. For starters, you used megan fox and I absolutely adore megan fox. Andddd I can always get down with some A7X so I wasn’t disappointed when I arrived here from the comment swap. Your first chapter flowed nicely, it was a good intro to the characters and shows the deep friendship they have for one another. I’ve kept reading aside from that first chapter because you’ve got me hooked and all I can say is; hot damn. Zacky. Zacky. Zacky. Zacky. I love him. I love you. I like that the chapters are lengthy and I absolutely love dialogue and you are good at writing it which makes it flow nicely when you’re reading. The layout is nice too. It contrasts well on the eyes.

I've actually noticed that some of the chapters are heavily diologued. I could imagine this more as a play for theater than a novel, but then again, fan fiction is fan fiction after all. By the way, the simplicity is perfect for this story. I'm pretty much testing the whole comment swap thing, so this would definitely cure my boredom.

Comment Swap brought me here and I am not disappointed ! I love the first chapter the most mainly because of the friendship between Savannah and Zoey. It reminds me so much of my friendship with my own friend and it's realistic too! Plus the relationship with Zacky is also realistic and isn't the cliche head over heels in love with you so I'm going to tell you' sort of thing. Most stories do that and it annoys me so much >.< You didn't ! Amazing job Kudos. xoxo

Well it just proved not to be their day for having sex. XD First the whole nose incident and then having his mom walk in on them. And what a lovely way to meet your boyfriend's mom I might add. But they're moving in together. Yay! Great update! :)

I've only just found this one but I really like it. I hope you update soon!

I have to say that was a little mean of Zack to make her think she was late for work. I would've been pissed if I was her haha. And I'm happy for Brian and Jess as well. The idea of Brian being nervous is seriously adorable. Cute update! :) Loved it!

Zacky really is trying to have sex in every room isn't he lol.. I found that funny, though I'd be mad if I had gotten up and didn't need to go to work.

Well everything in the garden seems rosy at the moment . Please update again soon xx

I'm glad she told Zacky the truth. And that he's not too mad about it.

Well I've gotta say that was hot and I'm glad that she told Zacky the truth. Pease update again soon xx

Well, this turned out pretty much how I expected. Except for the sex, wasn't expecting that. Though if Jacob ever comes into the picture again, I'm thinking Zack won't be as nice as he was during their last encounter. And they said "I love you." That was the cutest thing, especially Zoey's reaction. ^.^ And the fact that Zoey wasn't going to have sex on the couch. This was great! I loved it!

So I had read matter of luck and I didn't know you made a sequel to it!! Omg! I love it. :) I'm glad I found this!!!<3 Update soon!!

Kind of weird you updated this when I was just thinking about this story a couple of days ago. (I'm definitely going to think I had something to do with it just fyi. XD) But anyway, I'm glad that Zoey decided to tell Jacob goodbye at the airport. It'll still probably be a while before she completely forgives him and moves on from it, but at least she didn't let things end badly. And the fact that Zack actually pulled him into a hug was nice as well. My only worry though is how Zack will react to what Zoey tells him. I don't want it to be too bad, but we'll just have to see.

Also, second paragraph you have trying to ignore the guilty feelings that were cursing through her body. Cursing should be coursing. Not sure if it was a typo or you accidentally used the wrong word, but I though I'd point it out for you. :)

Loved the update! Can't wait for more!

Well it's been awhile but I'm still subscribe to this story. I still remember most of what happened. I don't think Zacky is going to be very happy with her when she tells him.

Of course, comment swap would bring me to a sequel. So confused. But I still feel the need to comment constructively :) I like your sentence structure though I feel like it's too much dialouge and not enough detail, but I did only read the first chapter so that could've changed.
From all the chapters you've obviously put a lot of work into this story and from all the comments this story is obviously popular so keep up the good work!