All The Thoughts Wasted On You - Comments

That was so awesome, haha!
And Ryan giggled ay Brendon being a slut, HAHA.
this = love.
I'm happy.
XO

i love it rach!
it's awsome!!!!
you rock at the ryden!!!u should be queen of all Ryden!!!

xXx

hey[:
it's loverdose from ino?
anyway, wow!
i like this story.

it's amazing how you can see into both their minds, and see the contradiction thats lying in ryans. i think everyones been in this situation at least once in their lives, and to see it typed up from someone elses point of view gives you a great perspective on what the situation is like in YOUR life. i don't know if that made sense, but whatever.

the paragraph about the social networking page is a good idea, as well. It briefly touches upon how Brendon loves Ryan, and it leaves you wondering if Brendon really does love Ryan, or wether he's just using him. their arms are around each other. Smiles are spread across both of their mouths.

Is Brendon coming to his senses, or is this man just not for Brendon? That part is good as well. It makes you think, y'know?

Overall, this story is good. I like it(: To improve, maybe make the title more appealing and luring, and possibly write about how Brendon feels about Ryan? We have lots of Ryan, but not enough of Brendon. It would give a good balance to the story.