The Revenge of a Friend - Comments

I actually forgot this story existed but I'm finally going through all my story update emails and this was one. I love this story idea, really hope you plan to finish it at some point, it'd be a shame if you didn't. Really hope we get to see what you planned for this. :)

@ BlackMorphine
No, i just never finished it yet.

That's the end? Omfg, seems like a fucking black hole in Brian's mind. Poor Valary.

hsdhfsdhfkjsdhfjksdhf Holy shit!! << my facial expression right now xD

I love you for making Val a nice character, so many people portray her as a bitch without even knowing her. Yeah, I know we don't know the guys either, but I like to think we know a little of their personalities through watching videos and interviews of them. (Hello All Excess XD)

I love the banner, that picture of Matt and Val is my favourite. He looks really gorgeous in it.

Something terrible and heartbreaking must have happened to Brian's wife for him to just go off at the deep end like that, I really didn't see the news report coming at all. I was wondering if he was suffering from some kind of illness with the voices in his head.

I wonder how his wife actually died, it must have been pretty horrific to make him go insane. And why would he wait until his best friend's wedding night to lose his mind? Does he blame them? Did one of them have something to do with it? Sorry, I'm thinking out loud haha.

Shit, that ending!! Did he shoot Matt? Val?
And why doesn't this have any recommendations?! It's a genius idea!! Not to mention, really well written! I love how you write Brian, you always manage to make him so interesting, if not slightly insane haha. But you write his character so well!!

I love his honey pie, please continue with it? I'll give you cookies :D

This story is really interesting and I'm excited to see where it goes. This is a pathway that not many people like to go down with A7X, but I like it. I'm really glad that Jimmy's alive in this story, because story's without him just never seem the same.

It's very well written, and flows pretty well except in some areas. There aren't really any grammatical or spelling errors and the layout is beautiful, as well as the banner. It's easy to read and I just love it.

Definitely subscribing, hope you update soon!

The banner is beautiful, as well as the layout.
You have came up with a creative plot, that not many people would think of. It's obviously a dark story. You give great insight to characters and develop scenes and situations nicely. Well done

This was very well written. It's an unique plot, even if it's kind of morbid. The summary was a good introduction, though I feel like if you skipped it, you wouldn't understand what's going on in the story. I was kind of confused as to how they didn't realize Brian in a mental hospital for a year and a half. Maybe that'll be explained later, I was just a tad confused. Anyway, awesome story! :)

so, I was excited to read this story since I like Avenged Sevenfold :) and you did not disappoint :) Even though there are only two chapters they were long (which I like ;) ) and well written (which I also like) so you get two thumbs up :D keep up the good work! :D

Hi :) i'll be completely honest and say that I really do not like Avenged Sevenfold, but this was still written well :) i actually enjoyed reading it, and i hope you continue it <3 i liked how the summary explained what was going on, because without it, i feel like i may have been a little confused xD good job!

This was genious of you. I think you're an excelent writer and that you have a really good story in here. Also, I think you'r characters are really well defined and that's something I'm strugling with my stories. If you have any tips please let me know. Great chapter :D

The summary instantly had my attention. It was a little long, but that made it more interesting in my opinion, it lets the reader know what they are in for. This has a lot of potential and I can't wait to see what happens in the future (:

I'm here from comment swap.

To be honest, what this story is about doesn't really interest me, but I read through the summary and a bit of the first chapter and I really think you are an excellent writer.

I'm sorry I didn't get into it, but I'm sure their are a million others who would adore this story!

Good luck! :)

Absolutely loved the summary! The summary was a littl longer than most, though it really set me up for what the rest of the story promises to entail. The first chapter was fabulous, even if it wasn't how you intended it to be, and the second chapter had my shouting at my laptop screen with a mixture of 'MATT, BRIAN ASDJHLSHFLD WHY.' Loved it! xx

D: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!
Matt, why didn't you listen?!
Dammit, i wanted to know what Brian had to say to Matt XD
Matt better not be dead, he can't be the first one to die :(
Freaking loved this :D
Can't wait for more!

Dude, this was a great start.
The tension is amazing, you wrote it out really good.
I can't wait for the time when Brian snaps, that's going to be REALLY good.
Great start honey :D
Can't wait for more!!

Your banner is amazing asdfghfjkd and so is that picture, nom
Let's just say, I LOVE where this is going, the whole image of Brian hiding the gun and kind of talking to himself. And when all the creepy shit got sorted and Matt went into protective mode over his tacos.
HOLY SHIT I LAUGHED OUT LOUD.
I've got this super cute image of him holding a taco and rocking back and forth in the corner of the room >_> <_<
But yeah *cough* I can not wait for this to kick in.

*Sits down and waits patiently for the entry while eating cake*