I like the little background of Cedric in here- especially since he's one of my favorites! I thought you executed this really nicely, especially about his father and entering the competition. I could totally see this as being his legit reason for joining the competition. Cedric just seems like that type of guy who wants to go against his father and has this quiet defiance, but at the same time, can't quite go against his own father's orders. The relationship with Cedric and Bren was a bit too hot and cold for me, but it was nicely executed. It was sad that she left though, I would have thought that she understood and accepted it. Although there wasn't much dialogue in here, I like the fact that I could feel the distress and doubt in it. Good job! I really liked this and this is my first time reading a Cedric piece.
March 31st, 2012 at 02:53am