Shattered By Broken Dreams - Comments

  • kessegs1719

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    Im actually obsessed. I hated Zacky at first and felt so bad for Savannah and now all I want is for them to be together because Zacky really does regret what happened. They're a perfect couple and there is not one thing i dont like about this story
    May 20th, 2013 at 02:26am
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    i really like your story :) please update sooon
    May 20th, 2013 at 02:24am
  • kessegs1719

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    I'm actually obsessed with this story!
    May 19th, 2013 at 07:33am
  • Music.DrownLife

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    Holy hell an update!
    I got to say my favorite thing about this chapter was the dialogue. You write the chemistry of all these people so well.
    May 14th, 2013 at 11:14am
  • darkbunny96

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    OH MY GOD I MISSED THIS STORY I LOVE YOU FOR UPDATING!!! It was amazing as usuall I really hope you update me often. Bless Jimmys little cotton socks he soo adorable, Zee and Vanna just need to get down to it already! XD
    May 11th, 2013 at 02:37am
  • amodernmyth88

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    ugh i miss his snakebites!! *pouts* i wanted to do snakebites BUT got talked out of it since i've got this uhm, beautymark or whatever it's called in english above my lip so my brother said it'd look superweird.. Sad

    ANYWAY back to this AWESOME story Mr. Green
    i totally re-read the chapter before this new one, just to update my brain and was I happy too, I once again got to laugh at the image of matt and the boys doin' bee gees.. lmao!! and damn.. to imagine Matt in tight white pants.. GUH!! *drools* i mean that man got one hell of a butt- and other things *cough cough*

    and then the new chapter.. jimbo.. how I love him!!
    “I didn’t realize Zacky was on the menu,” Jimmy laughed. “Does he come with fries?” *giggles* so cute and funny.. I can totally picture jimmy asking that with a straight- but mildly cunfused face Mr. Green
    gnome-sex?? bahahahah now that sounds interesting!!

    and goddamn there's a lot of sexual-tension going on between zee and vannah!! it's going to explode! Mr. Green

    wow now that's a long comment- could go on but wouldn't want to bore ya to death Wink
    May 10th, 2013 at 01:20pm
  • karenina

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    Catching up on this baby. I totally dig this and Savannah is saucy. ;) I especially loved the "John Travolta" bit with Jimmy. HAHAHA! In all seriousness I can't even imagine having an accident and losing my legs. I'm really liking the plot and the way you're portrayed the boys. Update soon!
    April 25th, 2013 at 04:58pm
  • amodernmyth88

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    “Holy crap, the lunch box has landed,” “I think the front row just got pregnant.”
    “How the hell has he fit in those pants?”

    Matt was doing John Travolta like pelvic thrusts which were making the front row almost pass out.
    “If he’s not careful he can put someone’s eye out with that thing!”
    “Well, I think they won this one,” “I’m no match for the anaconda. That is some serious ball separation he’s got going on there.”

    OH MY GOD YOU ALL BUT KILLED ME WITH THIS CHAPTER!! <3

    squishing Mr Happy- hahahahah funny name Matt! Mr. Green Gosh I just love this story so much- and their music challenge things are so funny Mr. Green
    aawh zee had problems keeping his wittle fwiend down Wink yeah, i think dinner can be very very interesting..
    poor jimbo being reminded of the spiders.. *shivers*
    February 3rd, 2013 at 11:14am
  • Music.DrownLife

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    Dick jokes will never not be funny. Jimmy's fear of spiders, Zacky's diet, and what Matt's packing had me remembering the peak of my A7X fangirling days.
    February 3rd, 2013 at 09:07am
  • ashlynn202

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    Totally made my night, I can go to sleep happy now. Lol. That was awesome. =D
    February 3rd, 2013 at 07:37am
  • Music.DrownLife

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    Cute chapter. The what if of them being married, Jimmy being everyone's rock, and Zacky basically saying he loves Savannah was adorable.
    January 19th, 2013 at 10:44am
  • purple89

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    this was good....progress is being made..i love the part about how she and Zacky could have been married by now :)
    January 13th, 2013 at 08:27pm
  • xxGee

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    AWW YAY RECOVERY!
    January 13th, 2013 at 06:08pm
  • Synyster Gates;

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    Loved it
    January 13th, 2013 at 02:32pm
  • amodernmyth88

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    aawh he looooves her Mr. Green
    they're just so darn cute when they talk with each other now, i just wanna stand next to them, grab the back of their necks and make them kiss Mr. Green

    jimbo- adorable as always!!!
    and matt being happy again *sigh*
    tommy- he's a funny one Cool
    can't wait to see what'll happen at the next city Wink
    January 13th, 2013 at 11:04am
  • Music.DrownLife

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    Ooh. They're back together. Yay! Awkward hanging out with friends and being secretive time!
    January 1st, 2013 at 11:05am
  • purple89

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    i really hope that her dad doesnt do anything stupid. i really think its a good idea for them to take it slow...they both have changed over the years and diving back into a relationship would just be disastrous....Zacky all awkward is so adorable...*droools* and i love the description of the fan girls....hahahahah...
    December 28th, 2012 at 04:32pm
  • chibihyuga

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    I just caught up with this story and I must say, I absolutely love it! I cant wait for the next chapter to come out. :)
    December 28th, 2012 at 02:56pm
  • Lexi Wombat

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    I hope things go swimmingly with them and Savannah feels comfortable soon, Zee's had to do a lot of waiting.
    December 28th, 2012 at 05:30am
  • amodernmyth88

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    aawh zee totally wants to try again, that's for sure! he's so cute!!!! i can totally picture him standing there with a sad puppy-dog look.. Mr. Green

    but vannah is right about them taking things slow and just get to know each other again as friends, and to keep it as secret as they can.. just in case her father flips-his-shit!
    December 27th, 2012 at 01:57pm