Of Love & Wonder - Comments

I've never read a Big Time Rush fic before but this was so beautifully written and you're layout is absolutely perfect!!

like, idk if I can handle the feels and now I wanna look into more BTR fics lol

this was so beautifully written and you're layout is absolutely perfect!!

Can't wait to see where you go with this!!

this was so beautifully written and you're layout is absolutely perf!

@ swsigh

Aww, thank you so much, dear You made my day!

I'm so glad I found this oh my goodness. I do not like Big Time Rush at all, but I didn't even pay attention to that. Your detail is flawless. I could completely imagine everything that was happening it was written that well. I wish all stories were written like this. Don't stop writing. Ever.

AH AH AHA HA AHA AHA AHA I'm from comment swap and oh sweet jesus of the comment swap world thank you for sending me here.
So first things first: I do NOT like big time rush, so my reaction to this story... well it's pretty darn strange.
Second: That was amazing. I literally wish every single story I got on comment swap could be just like this one.
Third: Your grammar, detail, just pretty much everything was just about perfect.
KEEP WRITING.

@ Skylight Madness

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it.

So...this blew my freaking mind and I loved it! I love the CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT and how you've THROWN A LOT OF THEIR PERSONALITIES into the story. I love how their PERSONALITIES differ and how it works for them. The sex was amazing (haha I never thought I would write that about a story). I think you deserve an award for describing a perfect sex scene, even the cute little awkward moment between them before it was initiated. All in all, I'd say you did good and yes, I believe that this is just the best story in the whole world and I love it.

@ i saw sparks
hehe, I'm never good a grammer, just get used to it. But besides that it was good

@ SirDelta

OMG this story did not begin with a sex scene, omg. Omg having a sex scene in the first chapter does not equal starting with a sex scene, especially when said first chapter is the equivalent in length to FOUR chapters of a typical story on Mibba. Heads up, you can develop characters and the relationship between them through sex. When sex is written as flooded with emotions and thought and not just written as "he pit his x in her y," then yes, sex can be used as a means of portraying the bond shared between people.

Maybe I would be able to take your criticism more seriously if your comment was actually grammatically correct itself...

OMG, I am sorry but this is not a good omg, this is a "Why did you start your story with a sex scence?" omg, the begining of the story is not the time for a sex scence, the carachters should be developed before they have a relation as this. This would work as a third where the first few are describing the two people. Sorry, but I did not like this that much, it was not a good time for a sex scene.

Hey there. Xd Dear author, comment swapper brought me here. First of all, I liked the title of the story and especially the title of the first chapter. Your descriptions are really detailed and flowy, that's what makes this story a nice piece of literature. I can't wait to see how you will end this and how your characters will develop. Keep up the great work. ~Marian.

Hey there. Xd Dear author, comment swapper brought me here. First of all, I liked the title of the story and especially the title of the first chapter. Your descriptions are really detailed and flowy, that's what makes this story a nice piece of literature. I can't wait to see how you will end this and how your characters will develop. Keep up the great work. ~Marian.

Hey there. Xd Dear author, comment swapper brought me here. First of all, I liked the title of the story and especially the title of the first chapter. Your descriptions are really detailed and flowy, that's what makes this story a nice piece of literature. I can't wait to see how you will end this and how your characters will develop. Keep up the great work. ~Marian.

Hey there. Xd Dear author, comment swapper brought me here. First of all, I liked the title of the story and especially the title of the first chapter. Your descriptions are really detailed and flowy, that's what makes this story a nice piece of literature. I can't wait to see how you will end this and how your characters will develop. Keep up the great work. ~Marian.

Hey there. Xd Dear author, comment swapper brought me here. First of all, I liked the title of the story and especially the title of the first chapter. Your descriptions are really detailed and flowy, that's what makes this story a nice piece of literature. I can't wait to see how you will end this and how your characters will develop. Keep up the great work. ~Marian.

Hey there. Xd Dear author, comment swapper brought me here. First of all, I liked the title of the story and especially the title of the first chapter. Your descriptions are really detailed and flowy, that's what makes this story a nice piece of literature. I can't wait to see how you will end this and how your characters will develop. Keep up the great work. ~Marian.

Hey there. Xd Dear author, comment swapper brought me here. First of all, I liked the title of the story and especially the title of the first chapter. Your descriptions are really detailed and flowy, that's what makes this story a nice piece of literature. I can't wait to see how you will end this and how your characters will develop. Keep up the great work. ~Marian.

Hey there. Xd Dear author, comment swapper brought me here. First of all, I liked the title of the story and especially the title of the first chapter. Your descriptions are really detailed and flowy, that's what makes this story a nice piece of literature. I can't wait to see how you will end this and how your characters will develop. Keep up the great work. ~Marian.

Hey there. Xd Dear author, comment swapper brought me here. First of all, I liked the title of the story and especially the title of the first chapter. Your descriptions are really detailed and flowy, that's what makes this story a nice piece of literature. I can't wait to see how you will end this and how your characters will develop. Keep up the great work. ~Marian.