Hello, this is for comment swap, though you may not read it (been 3 years since the last comment). I really enjoy the writing style and the brevity that you've captured in the chapters, it adds suspense and urgency to the pacing. I honestly find Chase insufferable, but depending on your intentions, that may be a testament to your writing ability. He reminds me of a character from a Brett Easton Ellis novel, naturally, I also find his characters insufferable, but that does not take away from his evident writing ability nor does my distaste for Chase reflect negatively on your writing ability.
July 4th, 2018 at 11:53am