I just read this! This was like. So real dude, a lot of stories I have read have not been realistic... Good job, you can't just leave it at that!! D: -goes to read the sequel-
I just stumbled across this story and read the entire thing in one sitting. I honestly had no idea who Torres was until I Googled him, but it didn't matter. You are a very talented writer and I couldn't stop reading it. It had all the makings of a true summer romance and you left us readers wondering what is next for these two. I'd love to read what happens when they both return home.
For now, I will take my time and enjoy your other stories...
I'm really sorry for being a silent reader but I'm not that good with words. I've been reading your story and I love it. Your story wants me to know more into the life's of the characters and to know how their life is after their summer vacation. I saw that you are debating on putting the rest of it up on this site and I really think you should. Please put the rest up :D
This is really good and I really wish that there was more! I would really like to see what Victoria would do when she found out who Fernando really was because that would be very dramatic! This writing is very good though!
I found this story recently and I finished reading it in one day! :D Absolutely wonderful! I like how they leave without Victoria knowing that Fernando is a professional footballer, but it would be interesting to know how she'd react. I also loved how sweet their romance was. This story is absolutely wonderful to read for the summer! :D Gives me hope for my own "Summer Romance". :) Thanks for writing this story! Hope there's a sequel maybe?
This was such an amazing story! I'm really sad that it's over and they've each kind of gone their separate ways. I really want them to meet each other again. Hope you post a sequel or some kind of follow-up because I'm dying to read more!
This story and your writing are absolutely amazing! I'm always waiting to see what is going to happen next. Nando is so adorable and sweet. I can't wait to read more.
I do hope you continue posting this, there are so few footballer-stories, and even though I don't like Torres at all, I am intrigued by this. I'm very bad at commentating stories, but I hope you'll remember that I'm here reading the updates. Uhm, kom nettopp på dette; er du svensk? Burde kanskje skrevet dette på norsk :P