I'm a huge Avenged Sevenfold fan so I instantly had the feeling that I would be interested in this story when I saw your banner. Very well written, thought out plot and I believe that I'll really enjoy reading this. I'm typing this after reading the first chapter only as I feel that it deserves a nice comment haha But honestly, you're a very well written writer!
Carly u have issues in general u need anger management big time becuz honestly ur attitude sucks ass, it seems tht ur not the only one tht people shouldn't be fucking with becuz Eve has a backbone and isnt afraid to tell u off so get over ur attitude and listen to what ur boss says and follow his orders thts all u r to do nothing else don't get an attitude about something u don't want to do u r beneath Matt u r just a member so chill out dude....Brian we all knew u have a thing for Eve but I kno ur not goin to mention it so it's cool, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
Wow Carly seriously has some serious anger issues and authority issues too. She caught on that Brian has taken a liking to Eve since he is determine to keep her out of harm's way from Undead. Though Carly thinks that Eve is a soy or something. I look forward to the next update!
Poor Eve she can't even catch a break from these gangs it hasnt even been 24 hours yet and she is already captured again....and Carly needs to cool her fucking jets like seriously I'm sure tht of u was in Eve's place right now you would be actin the same way sooo just chill and let Eve explain her story jeez, I honestly don't see what Zacky sees in u......can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
They treated her alot better then HU did. Carly has some major anger issues lol j/k i think she's a bad ass chick. Though she could be a little nicer.Group meeting? That can't be good..
So now Eve has finally told her side of the story and why she has HU marked on her arm. And it's a good thing that Nikki obeyed what the others because she would have killed an innocent woman. To be honest, Nikki is a bit to gun happy, she just goes full ahead without thinking too much about the consequences of her actions. I can't wait for the next update! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Man Carly really needs to take a chill pill! She has some angry issues, and it seems that Zacky is the only one that seems to calm her down though he is upset to what she pulled yesterday. I can't wait for the next update! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!