Only Liars, But We're The Best - Comments

  • PensNRedsTwoPointO

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    Love this story!! I read every chapter with 'Sixteen Candles' playing in my head! I love how the plot is developing at a slow pace to give the reader a chance to digest it all. My only suggestion is to have Pete get jealous and have Brendon or Pete to fall in love with Her. Cannot wait until the next update! Hope it is soon!
    July 24th, 2013 at 05:03pm
  • LexiFinn24

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    Update soon
    July 5th, 2013 at 10:03pm
  • ToxicMayson

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    this story is soooooooo good PLEASE UPDATE!!! lol
    June 2nd, 2013 at 10:52am
  • Cynder

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    I love the idea to this! :) I didn't see many mistakes so fantastic job with that. I loved the picture at the top of your layout, It really interested me and made me want to read your story to figure out why you had chosen it. Overall, great story. I'm very glad Comment Swap sent me here! :)
    April 19th, 2013 at 11:47pm
  • shortygirl

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    Please update! I need my fill of fall out boy
    March 24th, 2013 at 04:12am
  • lady_enygma

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    One of the best sixteen candles... stories ive read. And as soon as she called the cat georgie, i k ew it was Ryan :-) cant wait to read more
    February 25th, 2013 at 12:47am
  • shortygirl

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    I knew something was up with that cat. So does that mean Ryan knew about Pete this whole time? I wasn't expecting update so this was nice. I think Patrick was a little jealous to find a naked Ryan in her room lol
    February 24th, 2013 at 02:00am
  • Mrs.Katsumi.Grinch

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    So as you know I was a bit not liking the witch stuff when I first started this story, but I think yo've done your research well and this was a good chapter.

    I didn't see any mistakes or anything like that so you did really good with that.

    I like that you added in the familier I figured thats what the cat was but wasn't sure, its a nice relife to see that in a story when something like that is usally over looked, keep up the great work.

    Much <3 Kat
    February 23rd, 2013 at 08:33pm
  • LongLiveTheOutcasts

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    Great chapter! I figured Bren was a Dandy, but just lie Mrs.Grinch said, I'm really curious to know why the guys didn't answer their mobiles. I'd love another update <3 :)) ~Billz
    February 14th, 2013 at 06:13pm
  • Mrs.Katsumi.Grinch

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    Why? Why do you do this to me huh?

    You seriously make me so mad, how could you end it like that huh? I was so exspecting it to tell what happened then bam I was at the end already *Shakes Fist.*..

    Okay enough of my ranting I liked this chapter I knew Bren was going to be one of the bad guys, but sadly I'm more curious as to why the guys didn't take her calls, and if she's maybe being tricked by some one and its not the guys saving her seriously need more soon please?

    Sorry it taken so long to reply to this and I'm very glad that you update :D

    Much <3 Kat.

    P.s you should check out my Pete story
    February 13th, 2013 at 07:27pm
  • shortygirl

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    I'm so happy to this going again! I decided to reread it so I wouldn't be completely lost. I knew Brendon was evil.
    Sorry if I didn't reply yesterday I had one of my wisdom teeth pulled and really didn't want to do anything.
    February 10th, 2013 at 02:24am
  • justhannah;

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    Whoa, that wasn't expected. I love how you managed to catch us (or maybe just me) off guard. I didn't realize how much I missed this story until you updated. But yeah, I really enjoyed it! :)
    February 9th, 2013 at 02:41am
  • shortygirl

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    Please update soon
    December 31st, 2012 at 08:45pm
  • Mrs.Katsumi.Grinch

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    Any luck on an update by chance?
    December 4th, 2012 at 12:02pm
  • LongLiveTheOutcasts

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    Hi! :D I love the plot! You've got me hooked and I can't wait to see what happens. Sometimes, the grammar and phrasing could be improved, but otherwise I'm really enjoying this so far. Also, I really like your layout. :)
    November 20th, 2012 at 01:10am
  • Mrs.Katsumi.Grinch

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    Okay so I'm straight breaking my rule I normally don't comment a story till I get one back but I fucking love this story, now with that being said I've some issues one I don't really like the whole witch thing also Relics arnt books, just a thought I figured I'd let you know ... The witch thing just seems a bit odd to me but I've adjusted to it finally just not a big fan...

    I want to know if the Dandies got Brendon? You've not mentioned him in a long while so I'm curious as to where he has gone to...

    I don't want her with Patrick I want her with Pete I might scream if its not that way and as sick as that sounds its okay cause their step siblings but I really want to see him bite her to I think it would help with how his thirst had come back and it'd be super hot....

    I love you're layout the bleeding heart is freaking amazing dude I just i'd really like an update maybe, you was right you did leave us hanging and I'm not a fan of that.

    Much <3 Kat
    October 2nd, 2012 at 01:17pm
  • darlingdoll

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    (Comment Swap) This is a good story, some parts were kind of confusing and I had to go back and check to see what was going on. The biggest thing I would change is bigger text just to make the story more readable. Overall it was an enjoyable story!
    September 17th, 2012 at 02:46am
  • shortygirl

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    I say the cat is a dandy...i really loved the update! I really missed this
    August 31st, 2012 at 04:55am
  • shortygirl

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    Please update soon
    August 17th, 2012 at 09:29pm
  • heywhatsuphello

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    Well this is certainly interesting so far, I'm sorry that it's taken me so long to work on this but college and what not decided to drop lovely little bombs of surprise on me so here I go.

    I noticed some places where your phrasing was a bit awkward so if you have time I would go through and read what you're writing out loud and see if it flows, I know I have to do that sometimes, and usually helps my final product greatly.
    (Obviously I'm not doing that with this comment, but you get the point. lol)

    Plot wise, I like it. Its a bit different than what you tend to read on here so It's refreshing. Plus, its FOB and I mean who just doesn't love them.

    Overall, aside from your few examples of phrasing, this has good potential. Good job! (:
    July 24th, 2012 at 03:05am