This is an interesting premise, I must say. I find myself a bit confused by the meaning and significance of the dream sequences, and in all honesty starting a story with a dream sequence is a thing I've always considered cliche, but I trust that you'll elaborate as the story progresses. I commend you for your protagonist character's emotional depth, and also for your descriptions in general; the one in chapter 2 about blood "spattered like so much rain," struck me in particular as well-done. Being a stickler for grammar, I feel it's necessary to point out that you do have numerous errors in your formatting, the most obvious of which is your reccuring use of incomplete sentences. For instance, at the start of Chapter 2, "A deep shiddering tremor that was a result of cold," while being nicely descriptive and a good subtle indicator of fear, is not a whole sentence and should be joined with the first in the chapter. Just watch out for those, okay? In all, I remain confused as to the direction the plot is taking, but trust that you will work it out and explain as needed; indeed, I look forward to it as the idea seems interesting thus far. Keep going with this story, and best of luck!
Being a stickler for grammar, I feel it's necessary to point out that you do have numerous errors in your formatting, the most obvious of which is your reccuring use of incomplete sentences. For instance, at the start of Chapter 2, "A deep shiddering tremor that was a result of cold," while being nicely descriptive and a good subtle indicator of fear, is not a whole sentence and should be joined with the first in the chapter. Just watch out for those, okay?
In all, I remain confused as to the direction the plot is taking, but trust that you will work it out and explain as needed; indeed, I look forward to it as the idea seems interesting thus far.
Keep going with this story, and best of luck!