Oh shit! Ricky is about to kick some ass. I can sense that something is going to go down soon. Maybe it's sex or maybe it is asskicking. I am not sure yet but I can sense something.
For real though, Ricky? I agree with why Oli is angry. She has every right to be. I thought the end bit was cute and I liked the whole rehab bit. It was interesting.
you are just a fan-fucking-tastic writer ok i don't see why anyone would ever unsubscribe. this is one of my all time favorites, right here. this story is too amazing. that update was magnificent. please don't make us wait too long for another one!
the end was a nice twist... I liked all the random kisses they threw in there it reminds me of that saying absence makes the heart grow fonder... Also i was surprised she showed a great deal of self control when she seen him; i feel like she could have just exploded. I think there are things they are both hiding that NEEDS to come out before they end up pushing each other away... The way i see it the people in her life neeed to back off and let her breathe stop trying to fill her head with how bad a person ricky is I MEAN YES HE HAS THINGS HE NEEDS TO FIX PRONTO but the important thing is HE''S TRYING
A chapter of her in rehab would be awesome, so we can have a better look on how she's doing. And Ricky needs to start caring, i don't want her to end up with Jason :P lol. Your chapters never fail to entertain ! (:
Ricky, go fuck yourself right now. if you would just sit down for a damn second and listen to what Oli has to fucking say for once, you'd understand why she feels that way. but you're acting like a stubborn jackass. i think you should do a chapter or two with her in rehab, just to see how she feels, you know? but then skip over it for the most part. it's up to you with what you want to do, i'll still read and love it either way. update soon!
OKAY, WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH THEM? Jesus, "Oh, go to a rehab center. It'll make you feel all better, because we can't listen to you." This makes me so angry. Ricky is a giant dick. So is everyone else except for Oli, Jase and Zack. I hope Ricky isn't going to be this stupid through out the whole story. I think Oli should leave him. He's being a giant loser. I mean, really Ricky? You're just gonna send your girlfriend off to a rehab facility that she doesn't need? By the way, I totally didn't see that coming. That was like a major plot twist.
Wow I can't believe Oli's family, boyfriend, and the rest of the MIW made her go to rehab. such selfish pricks haha. great chapter, very emotional. I legitimately just cried lol. I think you should do a chapter or two of her being in rehab, maybe like the first two days and then skip to her release.
An amazing chapter. Do whatever you feel like you should do. I'm sure I'll love it. :) By the way, when someone ask me what kind of fanfiction I read I always say you because you are seriously my favorite. <3
Emotional Chapter... i think you should just skip to the day she's released... focus on how she's changed and improved and the methods she's learned :)