Haunt My Heart. - Comments

This is actually really great so far. I didn't read it when it was first posted, so, I'm reading it now and it's off to a great start. :)

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGG, THIS NEEDS UPDATINGGG

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Right off the bat, you should look over your summary. You need spaces after all of the punctuation--it's really difficult to read otherwise.
The same seems to go for the chapters themselves, as well as a few unnecessary capitalizations and some incomplete sentences. You may want to ask someone on mibba for grammar help if it's something you have trouble with.
That said, I do like the characters and plot--especially the names, they're beautiful! Good luck!

Update soon please? (:

I almost cried:( that was extremely sad.

oh no! thats so sad :(
i hope it gets better for them
but amazing chapter it made me cry i cant wait for the next one! :D

Update asap!! Great chapter

Oh no I wonder whats gonna happen next. I REALLY LOVE this story. Update asap? (:
I am totally subscribing <3

Poor Oli.... Ricky better not flip a tit. That's really hard to go through. Update!

this story is amazing.. please update!!!

I love this story!

Love the story! Update soon!

Totally amazing :)
I'm glad Ricky took responsiblity over the baby

Oh my god, I was about to kick a puppy when Ricky kinda hinted that he didn't want the baby. But I'm glad he thought about it.

If I was her brothers, I'd poop my pants. And jump Ricksters.

When he was talking about not wanting the baby I thought I was going to cry!
but I'm happy he's taking responsibility :D

I'm glad he's stepping up. That shows how much love he really does have for Olina :)

Ricky better be there for that baby and not just fake it for olina. But im happy he at least steped up to the plate :) now he just has to follow through!

I hope to whatever god is up there that Ricky actually wants the baby and be there for it. Atleast he knows that its partially his fault.

I'm going to prep myself for next chapter...I don't like being emotional when I read :P