Louis - Comments

so i have been meaning to comment on this for the longest time but i am just so lazy and my comments are always way too long. like this one probably will be.
but anywaysss this is like, by far my favorite piece of yours. i think it was the first thing i ever read of yours and i immediately read all your other shit because it was so fantastic.
it seriously gave me chills which is super rare for me, and the writing itself is so simple yet packs so much punch with every sentence. i fucking love it because that is such a hard thing to do and yet it seems to come totally natural to you and ugh, i'm just so jealous of your skill.
i think my favorite thing is just the sheer originality, ya feel? like there are a million stories about this topic but you manage to be so different and the idea behind it is so just... god, i don't even know.
just the mood, the atmosphere, the style, the idea. all of it.
ummmm, in case you couldn't tell, i loved it.
( gah i knew this would end up being mad long, my bad D= )

holy shit i got goosebumps which might be an exaggeration but seriously this is fucking amazing. and for some reason i love the "it really was time" in the description. It was almost poetic how everything had panned out. That his fate was in the hands of a stranger and now fate was delivering. i honestly have no idea what this will be about or where this is going to go but i'm so interested and intrigued it hurts a little

this. is. beautiful. 0__0