Hello there. :) Well let's get started, shall we? XD I was brought here from comment swap. You have a bunch of mistakes, there are spelling and grammar mistakes. I know it's hard writing all this from your ipod but you better correct this using a computer. I like the basic idea of this and it seems really interesting but all these mistakes take away from the story. I agree with the comment below too. That's all. Keep on writing and get better at it like all of us. Xd
August 5th, 2012 at 06:39pm