I thought this story was a brilliant glimpse into grief and the initial shock of losing something so important in one's life. You captured the hurt, the hopelessness, the disbelief, numbness, everything very well. It's a very heartfelt drabble filled with emotional turmoil and I really like how you wrote it, especially the last line. I felt it just emphasised all these feelings of hers and ended the story perfectly. I also like the softness of your layout. I think it heightens the mood very well.
The summary was lovely. I'm wondering if they're lyrics? Either way, I like that your summaries, no matter how short the piece is or how short the summary itself is, always matches so well with the story content. I feel like authors so rarely bother with summaries for drabbles so I always smile to myself when I see how yours connects.
The summary was lovely. I'm wondering if they're lyrics? Either way, I like that your summaries, no matter how short the piece is or how short the summary itself is, always matches so well with the story content. I feel like authors so rarely bother with summaries for drabbles so I always smile to myself when I see how yours connects.