November 6th, 2015 at 06:41pm
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First off, I love this layout. Right now I'm just reading the first chapter but I'll be coming back to read more!
The title alone is interesting, and I do like the summary being quotes from that person. The reader gets a real feel for who the characters are before even meeting them. There does seem to be quite a few characters, however.
The premise of a camp for addicts is really interesting and something I haven't yet seen, so I do like that. I'm very intrigued as to why Kalliope says everyone thinks she's crazy.
I'm not sure why Kalliope warms up to Forrest so quickly and shuts down Keegan immediately, but until I read more I'm chalking it up to just being a teenager. I suppose she thinks he's a creep, but to me, the catcalling seems like a way to break the ice.
I do relate to Kalliope, in that she's already annoyed by Aubrey. I probably would be too.
The interaction between the group was very fast paced, and I was a little confused at who was speaking at times, but I liked it, how Kalliope was getting bombarded with questions and taunts. I was half-expecting her to admit to a sexual assault of some kind. I do like the group dynamic, though. I am DEFINITELY interested in why Sebastian was there in the first place before becoming a counselor.
I really like this story so far and I can't wait to read more!
First off, I love this layout. Right now I'm just reading the first chapter but I'll be coming back to read more!
The title alone is interesting, and I do like the summary being quotes from that person. The reader gets a real feel for who the characters are before even meeting them. There does seem to be quite a few characters, however.
The premise of a camp for addicts is really interesting and something I haven't yet seen, so I do like that. I'm very intrigued as to why Kalliope says everyone thinks she's crazy.
I'm not sure why Kalliope warms up to Forrest so quickly and shuts down Keegan immediately, but until I read more I'm chalking it up to just being a teenager. I suppose she thinks he's a creep, but to me, the catcalling seems like a way to break the ice.
I do relate to Kalliope, in that she's already annoyed by Aubrey. I probably would be too.
The interaction between the group was very fast paced, and I was a little confused at who was speaking at times, but I liked it, how Kalliope was getting bombarded with questions and taunts. I was half-expecting her to admit to a sexual assault of some kind. I do like the group dynamic, though. I am DEFINITELY interested in why Sebastian was there in the first place before becoming a counselor.
I really like this story so far and I can't wait to read more!