I loved this story! It was really good haha. I read it all in like 2 hours I just couldn't stop!!! Nice job on the sexual scenes as well, they weren't bad at all.
I love this they're so cute! Though maybe you should have them take a shower before anything happens between them since neither of them have bathed in over a week. So maybe make it a romantic shower that leads to their first time together. Just a friendly suggestion! Update soon.