I feel so bad for Matt, but then again I don't. He really shouldn't be a dick and then go beat the shit out of Brian. Makes me sad. :( Anyways I hope you update this soon. I seriously love this.
I actually like the change in the phone call, but i feel like she wouldve been more hesitant in calling matt and a bit more outraged at bris injuries. Other than that, as always i love <3
Everything is beautiful when you update this story :D I want to know if Detective Sullivan will be able to discover what is wrong with Matt. Thanks for update and I'm wanting for more!
Ahahaaha decetive sullivan that man is so precious :) i cannot tell you how excited i was when i saw this story got updated, im happy i could be a butt..kicker into...motivation?? Idek. Love this though, poor bri <3
Ohhh my god i just read this story again cuz its been so long since youve updated but i reaaaallly want you to update because i love this so much and usually im not in to the boys being written kinda girly but im definately diggin it with this story and omfg i want to know for sure whats up with matt SO BAD so updaaaaaaaaate
Matt... You're a dick. Stop it. You're hurting my poor Brian. Also... Where's m Jimmy/Johnny action go? I enjoyed that a little too much for my own good. xD Can;t wait for more!
Wow, at first I didn't really like this story to be honest, because of how girly you write the guys, but I'm starting to like it... A lot. Those last couple of paragraphs... Damn. So Matty wants some Brian but thinks he can't have him, hmm? The only thing I would say about writing the guys better would make them 'laugh' instead of 'giggle' and not have them cry so much. I mean, I can understand that a pissed off Matt is intimidating, but they don't have to cry... Not even Johnny has to cry. I've never really liked when people write the guys super flamboyant, either. They're all pretty manly men, even if in these fics they are gay. I just like keeping their real-life traits, too, you know? But you do have a good plot going for you, and I think (overall) plot is most important. Anyways, keep going. I like it. Just some constructive criticism on my part, I guess. But I do like this story. I really do. Update soon!
I'm so excited for this to progress because I'm holding onto the hope that it will blossom into beautiful, angsty Bratt. Brilliant, mysterious plot. Why is Matt acting like this? Please update soon.
I really like this story I was like OH MY GOD matt is so mean and I love jimmy and how much you made him so funny and so him...i can't wait to read more