That was a giant d'oh situation! ...Damn... I wonder what the last sentence means. Nothing goes as planned? Can't they have a small break? I guess not. But still. Good chapter.
Damn.. That's just sad. I wonder how this will go for them and I they can fix this. It's not just one person hurting, it's them both. Even if it's not as evident for hotch as it is for her. Good chapter.
It certainly doesn't suck. It's not your best chapter either, but it doesn't suck at all! Other than that, I was wondering when the team would figure it out. If they would get caught or if one of them ended up in the hospital and they figured it out by that or some other scenarios like those. But this was a good way to do it. I wonder what will be next for the story. Good chapter
Consider it enjoyed! I really like your way of writing this. The characters are growing even more on me and the way they interact with one another simply seems so natural to me. It's as well written as ever and I'm as captured by this story as I was in the beginning. Which is quite a bit. I'm looking forward to seeing his things will go and be now that they have finally hooked up. Even more good chapters and I'm looking forward to even more.
Bahaha, I love Tasha's and Derek's relationships. They make me laugh. But YAAAAY for Tasha and Hotch finally getting together and moving forward. Can't wait to see how their relationships grows :)