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This story is completely different from what I normally read. However I am glad to have read this. It's very detailed oriented, and its, well I don't know. It's just that good. I now have to check out your others, because this was just too good. I love they layout it some what sets the tone for the entire story which is always super exciting, and really gets me into the story even more. The relationships between your characters seem to be really established. I don't question who is who, or what is going on.

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I know I just commented in In My Space, but I can't help it, this one is awesome too.
I love how the plot is already thickening! Duke and Red's friendship is super cute (and the tension with Duke and Greyson is tangible!), and the dialogue is super realistic. Once again, you're a master at letting readers know about a character's background without info dumping.

I think something fishy is going on with Red and Greyson, though. I don't think they're the bad guys and I don't think they're the ones doing the murdering, but I think they know a thing or two about what's going on. Can't wait to find out what happens!

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I know I just commented in In My Space, but I can't help it, this one is awesome too.
I love how the plot is already thickening! Duke and Red's friendship is super cute (and the tension with Duke and Greyson is tangible!), and the dialogue is super realistic. Once again, you're a master at letting readers know about a character's background without info dumping.

I think something fishy is going on with Red and Greyson, though. I don't think they're the bad guys and I don't think they're the ones doing the murdering, but I think they know a thing or two about what's going on. Can't wait to find out what happens!

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I know I just commented in In My Space, but I can't help it, this one is awesome too.
I love how the plot is already thickening! Duke and Red's friendship is super cute (and the tension with Duke and Greyson is tangible!), and the dialogue is super realistic. Once again, you're a master at letting readers know about a character's background without info dumping.

I think something fishy is going on with Red and Greyson, though. I don't think they're the bad guys and I don't think they're the ones doing the murdering, but I think they know a thing or two about what's going on. Can't wait to find out what happens!

a few spelling mistake but, im in love. this is great. perf perf perf the background is amazing, it just makes the story feel alittle more real. it gives an insight on how things are supposed to look. like i said im in love. :)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

The only piece of criticism I have is in the first paragraph of the prologue it says "when she were three years old", it should be "when she WAS three years old"

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You could have nothing written down and I still would've commented because your layout is so gosh-darn beautiful. And your writing style fits it! I love the name Anja, it's not something you hear everyday and it was a real breath of fresh air to read this! Cannot wait to see where this goes, and I really do wish you all the success! I love how you incorporated "I beg you please to start believe that it's way, to soon to, change your way" into your storyline. It fits the plot nicely and I cannot wait to see what happens to Annabelle and Anja!

Banner is gorgeous. The font is easy to read and the picture draws you in. I will say that for me I needed not just the details but also the emotion behind them. By expanding the emotions behind the details, you would be able to draw the reader in and not make it seemed so rushed. I do like the mexican cousin angle! Keep writing.

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First of all, I guess I would like to leave a comment that is maily about the layout. It is so pretty! Some people have layouts that are just crowded and confusing. Where al, this one isn't to crowded, and makes me want to read more. One thing you COULD change is the font size, a TINY BIT bigger. But it isn't a must. This story has the potential to be really popular on Mibba! So don't stop writing it definetly keep going! I will be stalking on this story, subscribing, and recommended! So I guess now I am just rambling, because I don't think this comment is 2oo yet. So I will continue to wish you good luck! G o o d l u c k!!!!!!!

Hey I found your story on the comment swap, and I don’t the plot of the story yet, I haven‘t been drawn in or I don‘t feel as if I want to know more, don’t get me wrong it has and an amazing plot, but I just couldn’t find myself to get into the story as of yet. Hopefully as you post more chapters I would be able to get a sense of the characters personalities more. That’s the one thing I hope to see and get from a story is a sense of the characters personality, make sure that you explain and help the reader understand why she has always said No to going to Mexico, give it a reason and hopefully you will be able to maybe even make a twist in the story by doing so. Its also really cool how this isn’t a romance of the bat kind of thing as of yet, which is nice to see. Im not going to comment on your English as English isn’t your first language but you’ve got the basics of getting your point across. Also the layout is good for the story, suit’s the plot and it doesn’t distract from the story itself. I hope to read more and good luck with the writing process!

I absolutely loved the banner. So gorgeous, the layout was pretty too. The only problem I had was the font size, kind of small and I had to squint to read.
Anyways, I think that's very cool how Annabelle's cousins are in Pierce The Veil, I'm not a huge fan of them but I know of them.
This story as a lot of potential, keep writing. You're doing an amazing job so far :3

I'm not going to comment on the grammar and punctuation because it's obvious English isn't your first language and I can't write in any language other than English so you did very well. :D I'm not familiar with Pierce The Veil, this makes me want to check them out. And your layout is beautiful.

I absolutely love the story layout and your banner! Not really a Pierce The Veil fan, but it didn't really matter because you introduced all of your characters so well! I think your dialogue was really well presented, which ultimately helped back up the surroundings and they were equally well described! Really well done :) xx

I'm from the comment swap.

Firstly, when I read a story, the first thing that drags me in is the layout. I hate reading the ones where you can't actually see the writing, so this one is great!

Secondly, Spelling and grammar are a huge thing for me, which you have done perfectly.

Sadly, I wasn't able to get into the story and for that I am sorry.

I was rounded up by the comnent swap. So just keep that in mind.

Your layout was so professional looking, and I like the title. I really just couldn't get into the actual story. I wanted to try and like the story, trust me.The writing is good, I just generally tend to read stories of a darker breed.

Just the simple case of Not My Genre.

I absolutely love your story layout and banner! What do you use to create your banners?

This story was really great, but the grammar kind of lost me a few times. Like the run-on sentences that should have been five sentences, but were just separated by commas. But your plot was interesting and your layout was gorgeous, and all-in-all it was a very interesting story!

I really liked it, well-written. I liked the way you went with the family thing it was interesting. I really liked the layout. All of it was really reallly well done. I Anaja was cool very relatable my favorite character.

I was definitely intrigued! You should keep going with this! c:

(: I like it so far! And the layout is super pretty. I can't wait to see where this goes!