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  • raja sahara

    raja sahara (100)

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    Okay, this isn't the same comment but if I can remember, hopefully it'll be similar.

    First, thank you so much for entering! And second, you did wonderfully! I really enjoyed this story mostly because John is the 'other man'. I kinda wish we saw more of Kade and his and Addie's relationship though, but that's okay–more John! He's so cute. Sigh. All I want is John O'Callaghan...

    Anyways, you tied in the myth really well. Like it was obvious who was who (minus the fact that it's in the summary) and I didn't have to search for it or anything.

    Good job! :)
    April 15th, 2012 at 11:46pm