I really liked the concept of this story! Some of your word choices were awesome, and I liked how at the end of the story, she (he?) decided not to jump, and decided to continue on with life knowing that it'll get better!
The only this is that I didn't feel like the story flowed well. On the bright side, there were very little to no spelling errors!
May 17th, 2012 at 10:46pm
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The only this is that I didn't feel like the story flowed well. On the bright side, there were very little to no spelling errors!