Firstly,your layout's cool, and thank you for having a eligible font (I've seen some story layouts which make it impossible to actually read the story). Also, I like that you've used page dividers instead of using bigger line spacing, though I kind of find those particular dividers a little too distracting. It's probably because I'm like a magpie and shiny things distract me.
Your plot idea was quite original, I loved the fact Eames has a fear of commitment because I got the feeling he was a bit of a Jack the lad in the movie. He also came across as a bit of a self-absorbed character in the film, so I thought it was nice that you had him be Maggie's saviour :) He's really sweet when he's with her and it's a differen't side to him. Also loved the fact he proposed to her in the dream :)
What I will say, is I would have liked it to be expanded a little more. You've put in Maggie's backstory I know, but I just feel the story could have been fleshed out slightly.
It's probably because I'm like a magpie and shiny things distract me.
Your plot idea was quite original, I loved the fact Eames has a fear of commitment because I got the feeling he was a bit of a Jack the lad in the movie. He also came across as a bit of a self-absorbed character in the film, so I thought it was nice that you had him be Maggie's saviour :)
He's really sweet when he's with her and it's a differen't side to him.
Also loved the fact he proposed to her in the dream :)
What I will say, is I would have liked it to be expanded a little more. You've put in Maggie's backstory I know, but I just feel the story could have been fleshed out slightly.