If I Never Said It, Would You Still Know? - Comments

  • MaddieP

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    Any chance you will be updating/finishing this? I love it!
    August 19th, 2014 at 07:18am
  • synonymforsarcasm

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    Can I say that I love this. I love the fact that he just joined the game unannounced for fun. That she is giving him for a lack of a better word. "normal" people moments
    May 14th, 2014 at 07:48pm
  • jazter

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    I think you can go any number of directions in this story, really. He's met her pub friends, he could meet Nate and her old friends whom she surrendered in the break-up. She could meet his friends. She could get a deeper taste of his 'real' life. Her parents. His family. Loads of directions, really! SO much potential, IMO! And it's such a tasty read.
    March 8th, 2013 at 10:31pm
  • Marisyana

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    I LOVE THIS STORY!! Seriously, it had me smiling and tearing up and doing fist pumps because Sid is actually described having sex (and very well, I might add). I could tell by the last chapter that you've reached kind of an impasse in the story--anyone who writes will hit that dead spot--but think how you would want it to end and let that inspire you. And thank you so much for reading and commenting on my story!
    March 4th, 2013 at 12:11am
  • jazter

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    I really liked this, I hope you'll consider updating again! You could use a bit of beta-read as some typos don't get caught by spell check (surly instead of surely, barley instead of barely) but overall it's good and I like the story line!
    November 4th, 2012 at 12:16am
  • babygurl1944

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    Love this story and hope that you update soon.
    September 14th, 2012 at 11:07pm
  • nikijamiie

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    Love this story please update soon!
    August 4th, 2012 at 04:31am
  • temporarylove

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    I love this. Very cute. :) Keep on writing. Can't wait for more when it comes. :)
    July 7th, 2012 at 07:24am
  • Hola1123

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    Soupy brings my thoughts right out! But this was the sweetest chapter! :)
    July 6th, 2012 at 05:00am
  • soupy

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    As sweet as this story is, I always read a little sadness into it. Sadness that Sidney has to bear the burden of Pittsburgh - heck the entire NHL - on his shoulders and constantly be "on". That he cant be a regular 24 year old guy, and do the things all of his childhood friends do. It was nice that he had that moment on the ball field where he could just be Sid.

    It is also nice that he has someone like Emma who sees this and understands this.

    I look forward to the next update!
    July 5th, 2012 at 07:34pm
  • NATALiEpwins

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    love love LOVE this, can't wait for more updates!
    July 5th, 2012 at 05:33pm
  • Bekabee240

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    Please keep updating!
    July 5th, 2012 at 03:07am
  • soupy

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    Holy cow, that was hot!

    I guess they really missed each other!

    It will be interesting to see where they go from here.
    July 4th, 2012 at 03:37am
  • AlissaRose89

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    Love it!! Can't wait for more!!
    June 2nd, 2012 at 07:37pm
  • Jayla1231

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    I love this so far and litwerally laughed out loud at the last chapter.......... :)
    April 30th, 2012 at 09:26pm
  • soupy

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    I am loving where this is going. I think they are great together. You capture her emotions so clearly.

    Her relationship with her father looks like it may come into play a little more - especially as he seems to live so close to Sidney.

    Cant wait for the next update.
    April 30th, 2012 at 03:46pm
  • nessajc

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    Love it! Sad that I'm barely discovering it, but now I'm all caught up.

    Update soon!!!
    April 25th, 2012 at 07:05am
  • tips

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    This is pretty cute :) I am excited to read a few more chapters and see how it develops
    April 24th, 2012 at 07:37am
  • soupy

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    This story is so cute. I like that there is a comfortable banter between the two of them.

    It will be interesting to see what develops between the two of them.
    April 24th, 2012 at 03:53am