The Boy from New York City - Comments

I can see exactly what you mean when you compared the incident to Anastasia. It's brilliant the way you write and describe everything. You definitely know exactly who your characters are and where this is going, and your spelling and grammar is near perfect. Sam is really level headed, which I like. Really good job with this =)

i like it so far, im only one chapter in and i cant wait to read more. There are a few really minor errors (like some capitalisation is off but nothing that really matters). I like the way you write dialogue, its not boring and quite realistic, which is hard to do.
I love it so far and cant wait to read more and see what happens :-)

Awesome! Really like it so far. I like the relationships in this story and the fact that it's not all sunshine and rainbows. I also really like the twist with Samantha having to be Sam. (Reminds me of Ouran High School Host Club :3)

This is such an amazing story(: And I agree with the member below me about he beginning sounding like A Cinderella Story. The detail and description is fantastic and I love the layout because it fits the story so well. The chapters are just long enough so I don't get too bored too easily. I love the two together, they would seem awesome together(: But they seem a little like opposites... we'll see where it goes!

This is such an amazing story(: And I agree with the member below me about he beginning sounding like A Cinderella Story. The detail and description is fantastic and I love the layout because it fits the story so well. The chapters are just long enough so I don't get too bored too easily. I love the two together, they would seem awesome together(: But they seem a little like opposites... we'll see where it goes!

At the very very beginning this reminded me of A Cinderella Story. :) After that very first part of the beginning, definitely not though. Great story! I love how fast the characters are developed and you feel like you can personally feel every little bit of their pain. Great job!

I can't wait to read more!!!
This is a very different story from your other one, but just as good
I hope she finds out where her brother and parents are
and figures out what happened.
I'm sure ALex is the one to help
Post more sooooooooon :D

Great so far!