This is super interesting and the chapters are separated really well to make me want to keep on reading! I love that it is quite creepy without being super scary too early on (bar the first chapter that really got me hooked)! I think the characters are all really easy to relate to whilst still all being interesting and unique. One small improvement is just that sometimes the dialogue doesn't always feel like things real people would say? Not all the time but it might be worth thinking about :) But generally, carry on with the really great story!
January 16th, 2019 at 11:01pm